Revisions for Earning Freedom · 12:43pm
Have you ever gone over something you've worked on a while after you made it and just looked for errors?
I probably should have done this a while ago, but I have, and wow.
So for the next few weeks I'll be doing revisions on all current chapters of "Earning Freedom", help it make more sense. (Need to add elaborations and make sure dates and actions line up better. Close plot loopholes and such.)
Thanks to you who like it, for some how, managing to stick with it.







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>>246848 I see a banana split waiting to happen...
>>246760 No. That's George over there.
*banana waves arm*
>>246567 Illogic? THE ILLOGIC? Who do you think you are? Some kind of caped banana phone waltzing around a vanguard with a magical oppression stick capable of wiping out it's entire race?
>>246427 The Illogic.
>>242224 Actually, out of pure curiosity, what brings someone as high ranking as you to my page all of those weeks ago?
>>242224 Wha eva! I do wha I wan!
I know
>>242210 It took you eight weeks to answer...
Also, you stole Click Clock's eyes!
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