Well, it wasn't a very popular story, but I still feel bad for letting down the audience that I did have for it. I think what's going to happen is I'm going to rewrite Shining Judgment but this time make it more conducive to the atmosphere of the show. Military conflict is just not fun to read about in the pony universe because it's not what MLP is about so in my rewrite, I plan to make it more lighthearted but still have a similar premise: A conflict with the heir to the throne. I just need to figure out how to make it more intriguing without introducing any violence or OOC-ness.
Disclamer: This contains two spoiler characters from episodes later in the season. In this fic, they will most likely be NOTHING like the way the cartoon will portray them so apologies in advance for probably a huge amount of OOC after that ep hits in April. Also, I do not intend for this fic to be any more violent than the Lord of The Rings movies. Hopefully I can make an interesting story without using violence at all, but things may change depending on where I decide to go.
Shining Armor, a young colonel in Equestria's army is getting ready for a huge battle with Prince More Dread who wants to claim the throne in Canterlot for himself. Due to its nature, the war forces Shining Armor to make tough decisions while still clinging to a broken moral compass. He seems outnumbered and outmaneuvered, but he remembers someone he met whose friendship and love he has to count in if he wants to succeed against More Dread.
PS: Any type of criticism is welcome. I want to improve my writing any way I can.More Less