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Some things about me...


User ID: 8,130
Registered: 8th Jan 2012
Last Seen: 3h, 22s ago
Story views: 18,280

Fan of ponies since 2011. Pinkie Pie is my favourite one.

I'm also the founder of The Cake Family group. If you love them as much as I do, you will be welcome.

Thanks for following me and for reading my stuff, I really appreciate it.

If you are a writer, and you are feeling depressed and worthless, read these words by Rated PonyStar. They helped me a lot, I hope they help you too.

I have a deviantart account, under the pseudonym of AverageName, because apparently Alpha Scorpii is already taken. Some of my stories are also there, as well as some drawings of monsters. It's something I like to do from time to time.

Featured Stories

[Random]
Dash tells Twilight the story of a strange beast which wanders around Ponyville.
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[Slice of Life]
Pinkie Pie has a tummy ache.
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Non-pony stories.

If you are curious about what do I write when it's not about colourful ponies, take a look at these:

READY... FIGHT! (blog   deviantart)

The Monster in the Cave (blog   deviantart)

Some stories I really like

[Slice of Life]
The unheard thoughts of the mane 6's fathers.
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[Comedy] [Random] [Adventure]
Come and hear the tale of an out of place creature in the seemingly perfect land of Equestria.
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[Comedy] [Adventure]
Applejack deals with ascension to godhood.
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[Romance] [Slice of Life]
As they make a gingerbread house the Cakes reflect on their struggles, their lives, and their love.
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[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
Princess Luna isn't an Ebenezer Scrooves, is she?
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Some stories I really like (One-shot version)

[Comedy] [Random] [Alternate Universe]
Celestia, Luna, and Pinkie Pie have lots of random fun in an alternate universe.
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[Slice of Life]
Fluttershy's brother, a strong, confident, handsome stallion, visits Ponyville. Fluttershy, who's always been jealous of her brother, finds herself growing more and more upset as he outdos her at everything.
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[Slice of Life]
Celestia tries to make up for past mistakes.
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[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
On a blustery night, the Cake Twins embark on an epic quest for the legendary Plate of Cookies!
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[Slice of Life]
In all the time they’ve been together, the Cutie Mark Crusaders have never seen Scootaloo’s home or family. Why? The speculation is as wild as their crusade ideas! But today, the truth comes out, as they finally meet Scootaloo’s
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Hidden Gems

[Comedy] [Random]
Pinkie Pie hears voices that tell the story of life as it happens. She learns the secrets of these voices, and takes control of this story. Hilarity ensues.
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[Comedy] [Slice of Life]
Pound Cake and Pumpkin Cake learn that they need each other.
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[Slice of Life]
Rainbow Dash remembers the best memories of her parent
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[Slice of Life]
Pinkie Pie comforts her little siblings during a thunder storm
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[Sad] [Slice of Life]
There are few figures powerful enough to spark pure admiration. Those figures are hard to forget.
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Other stories I also like...

The Great Equestrian Picture Book(Multi-chapter, Complete)

A story with pictures. Amazing pictures.

Discord Went Down to Appleloosa(One-Shot)

I love the song, and I love this one.

Today I Will Be a Princess(Multi-chapter. Complete)

Slice of Life at its finest.

The Piano Pony (One-Shot)

This fic is basically the song Piano Man, but written in prose and with ponies instead of humans. Since Piano Man is one of my favourite songs, I had to like this one.

The Cake Twins Surprise Party (Multi-chapter. Complete)

Reading this fic is like eating sugar. Lots of sugar.

Obsessive Collection Disorder (One Shot)

If you ever were a Pokémon kid, you have to read this one.

The Villains Anonymous Support Group (Multi-chapter. Incomplete)

Discord organizes a support group. Come on, people, the concept alone is hilarious.

Homesick (One Shot)

I have a soft spot for fics about Celestia and Filly Twilight. This one is just adorable.

Attack of the Smooze! (One-Shot)

A little funny story with a great lesson.

I Will Be Strong (One Shot)

So far, the only story on this site who managed to wet my eyes.

The Last Brony Gets His Wish (Multi-chapter. Incomplete)

One of the most unique Brony in Equestria stories I have ever seen. Its first chapter was the inspiration for Six Bronies.

The Birds And The Bees(One-Shot)

Where do foals come from?

Pink Personal Hell and Altering Fate (One-Shot)

This is an interesting story. The plot is nothing unusual, but the way it's written is curious and quite original.

Other stories I also like (Pinkie Pie box)

As I said above, Pinkie is my favourite pony, and I tend to read a lot about her when I feel in the dumps.

A smile is all it takes (Multi-chapter. Incomplete)

This was one of the first fics I read on FIMFiction, and probably the only Pony on Earth story I follow rapturously.

Just Smile (Multi-chapter, Incomplete)

I love this story because it captures perfectly the true spirit of Pinkie Pie: always smile, always try to bring light into darkness, sometimes literally.

The Brightest Timeline (One-Shot)

A little fic with an ending I totally didn't see coming. It surprised me a lot, and left me thinking deeply for a while.

Pinkie Predicts Predicaments(One-Shot)

A nice little story about Pinkie and The Cakes.

Pink and Famous (One Shot)

If you, like me, are a person who dreams of gaining fame one day; you may feel identified with Pinkie in this nice little story.

Rain (One-Shot)

Pinkie in a rainy day.

Pinkie Pie Is and Eldritch Abomination (One Shot)

Beware, this story contains existential horror. But, if you are into this kind of stuff (like I am sometimes) give it a try.

Belated Birthday(One-Shot)

A sweet little story set during Pinkie's birthday (not Party of One)

Gallop from the Ghosties!(Multi-chapter, Complete)

It turns out that Pinkie is scared of ghosts, after all.

More Than Her Mane(One-Shot)

If you like Pinkie with straight hair (and I said Pinkie, not Pinkamena), maybe you'll like this one.

A Day In The Life(One-Shot)

A normal day in the life of Pinkie Pie.

Normal? Are You Crazy?! (One-Shot)

Pinkie Pie acts completely normal... wait, what?

Pinkie's World(One-Shot)

I wouldn't know how to describe this one, so just read it.

Fancy That (Multi-Chapter, Incomplete)

Pinkie Pie and Fancy Pants. Crazy enough to work.

This is truly the last time I talk about the game. :twilightblush: I promise I won't annoy you anymore after this one.

So, after many hours of playing, especially because I had to start all over again due to a bug, I’ve finished Neverwinter Nights 2. Now it's time to analyze it and decide if it was worth the six euros I paid for it.  

One of the main reasons why I wanted the game was to try the warlock class. In that aspect, the game exceeded my expectations. Warlocks are awesome. They can cast their spells as many times as they want, they can summon undead soldiers, they can take control of enemy units (even though I didn’t use this one much), they can imbue fear in enemy units, they can summon tentacles...

And at high levels they learn the best spell of all: Word of Changing, also known as the "Now I’m Going To Turn Into A 9 Feet Tall Devil And Shred Those Two Iron Golems To Pieces With My Bare Claws" spell.

Nearly invincible except when fighting against adult dragons and/or many powerful enemies attacking at once, and even then I’m sure they were cheating.

As for everything else, overall the game was pretty great, I had a lot of fun.

It’s indeed an improvement over the first Neverwinter Nights, especially in the character creation. There are more classes to choose from and more races and subraces, even though all of them are basically humans with pointy ears, weird skin color, pretty hair or horns. I wish I could play as something like a lizardman or an illithid, that would be awesome.

There are ten different companions but you can only be accompanied by four when you’re on quests, which means you can choose the ones who complement your character the best, or just the ones you like the most. Some situations and dialogues will be different depending on your class, race and/or alignment; so the game has quite the replay value. Even if I chose to play as a human warlock again, there were some side quests I couldn’t do because I had accidentally sold the items necessary for them, so there are still a few surprises left. Now I’m going to lend the game to a friend, but when I get it back I may play it again.

On the other hand, the game feels a bit... incomplete. It gives the impression that there are many more things they could’ve done with it, but were never developed. For example, in the character creation you can choose a deity for your character, but that had no repercussion in the game and no one mentioned anything about it; although maybe that was because I wasn’t playing a cleric, so it wasn’t really important. Or maybe it was because I chose a lesser deity, a unicorn goddess.

Why a unicorn goddess? Because ponies.

The romance options are also quite disappointing. Actually, I should say IS, because there is only one despite the fact that half of my companions are female. Only one romance option, and of course it’s not with the girl I wanted. I wanted the half-devil girl, but the game gave me the elf. I have nothing against the elf, she is a very nice person, but I wanted the half-devil girl. I think she’s funnier. And cuter. But of course, that's just my personal opinion.

You’ve probably noticed that I keep saying ‘devil’ instead of ‘demon’. Sorry, I'm being nerdy. :twilightblush: Devils and demons are two different things in Dungeons & Dragons, so they can’t be used as synonyms.

I’m not going to talk about the ending, because then this blog would be twice as long. I will just say that it could’ve been better.

But the positive aspects weight more than the flaws, in my opinion. It was a very pleasant experience. I think Neverwinter Nights 2 is one of those games you remember not for the whole story, but for the little details, the small side quests, the characters you met and some memorable moments which make it worth playing.

And I got all that for only six euros. :moustache: Thank you, second-hand shop.

In a nutshell: I liked the game, it was a lot of fun, and now that I’ve got that out of my mind maybe I could write something. Although it’s a pity that the Toolset doesn’t work, because I would like to try and design a few adventures of my own for my warlock.

Oh, well... at least I still have the map editor of Warcraft III, where I can make my main character be a greenish tentacled blob.

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My stories


The Night of the Annoying Mosquito

Celestia has faced many terrible foes throughout her life, from tyrant unicorns to the very embodiment of chaos. However, the time has come for the noble alicorn to fight against the most dreadful of monsters, a vile creature which dwells in the shadows of the night, flying through the darkness as it thirsts for the blood of innocent ponies.

It is time for Celestia to face... the common mosquito.

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Written to fight my writer's block. It worked. I hope you like it.

A million thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader once again.

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Her Brother Doesn't Talk Much

But she doesn't care.

A short tale about Big Mac and Applebloom. Nothing too spectacular, but I hope you like it. Takes place a couple of years before the start of Season 1.

Special thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader once more. The amazing cover has been done by PapaSam. Used with permission.

Also avaliable on deviantart

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The Face Of Chaos

Equestria has been plunged into a neverending storm of disharmony and nonsense, all by the hand of the entity known as Discord. But the last hope remains in a lonely old unicorn, as he climbs Discord's mountain to fight him, in a desperate attempt to restore the lost harmony.

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A short story about how Discord was defeated the first time, written to celebrate Halloween. It comes a bit late, I know, but still I hope you like it.

I had no proofreader for this one, so expect to find grammar mistakes, because English is not my first language. Feel free to correct me at anytime.

Rated Teen for safety, even though I think it's pretty harmless.

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Pound and Pumpkin Cake in: Get the Cookies!

Pound and Pumpkin Cake want cookies, but will they be able to get them?

A silly short story featuring the Twins, Gummy, and Mrs Cake on a minor role. Nothing great, but still, I hope you like it.

Thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader for this one.

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Pinkie Pie And The Fly

Twilight finds Pinkie Pie staring at a fly.

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Another one of my stupid short stories involving ponies and invertebrates. Came to my mind after watching a fly doing fly things.

Once again, a million thanks to Inumaniac for being my proofreader.

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#495082 · 6d, 7h ago · · ·
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Thanks for the fave of still needed

#475640 · 2w, 9h ago · · ·
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*Ahem*

Thanks for the fave of her hardest duty, my sweet belle, and thank you for the watch.

#474591 · 2w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>474584 You're welcome :twilightsmile: It was a pleasure, I really liked it.

#474584 · 2w, 1d ago · · ·
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thanks for the fave of lullaby for a stormy night

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#405991 · 7w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thank you for the favourite :twilightsmile:

#399931 · 7w, 5d ago · · ·
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thanks for the fave

#367272 · 10w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>366404 Sure :twilightsmile: Thanks for the invitation!

#366404 · 10w, 4d ago · · ·
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Hey I just made a baby pony group and was wondering if you wanted to join?:pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile:

http://www.fimfiction.net/group/197959/baby-ponies

#326374 · 14w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks for the fav & follow! :pinkiesmile:

#293176 · 17w, 1d ago · · ·
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I'm glad you enjoyed my story Gator Season. :twilightsmile:

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