:rainbowderp::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild: yeah. get em Rainbow. BURY THEM!
It's fruit punch, no, lemonade. [Note: Spoof on the Derpy Mail fan-made video]
Rainbow Dash drinks a love potion. At first everypony thought it was cute, but soon it becomes a problem.
Oh, Hai!! I see you there
>>6379963799 Thnks. You get friendships sir or madam.
Yes, if you need someone to pre-read a story for you, go ahead and send me a PM. I would be happy to help.
That was a really cool story and I look forward to more of your work as you improve. If you need any help just ask, plenty authors will be willing to help, including me, though I'm more of an "active lurker" on this site.