What do you think will happen when three elden ring players end up in equestria to protect ponies from caribou?

Hey guys, i am writing my first story and im feeling like its not the way it should be, is there anybody out there who wants to help me edit this i will really appreciate a little help. as i told you before English is not my native language. please help me. thanks.

Well hello there everypony, as you know I am new in this site and i haven't ever writed a single story before, and English is NOT my native language either.
so please understand and support me.

as i told you before i am new in Fimfiction (writing stories) so i'm still learning.
please tell me anything you know about writing stories and anything about using this site, i was only using fimfiction to read stories you know?.

thanks and see ya:)