• Published 1st Feb 2024
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Merry May's Time With a Human - TheDerpyLover



Merry May accidently runs into Equestria's resident human(and her friend) after work, going home with him. Things get hotter from there.

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Comment posted by MagicalPony2099 deleted February 1st

Happy to have helped with this one. 👍

I'm really sorry about my comment I did that you deleted. But I get ticked off if there is a story that has a human in it, but no human tag for the tags for that story. I'll read this story soon and give my opinion for it by blog.

Based on the title and the description, I'm guessing you're one of those people who treats apostrophes as things that happen to someone else.

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Nah you're good. It seemed way more rude at 4 am when I posted this lol so im sorry for deleting it

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What do I mean? I mean that you have apostrophes missing in places where they belong. (I thought that was obvious, but I see now what my error was.) Look at this phrase from your description:

Equestrias resident human

Right now, it's a plural, meaning more than one Equestria. If you had included an apostrophe where it needs to be, it would look like this:

Equestria's resident human

It is now possessive, meaning you're talking about the resident human that Equestria has. See how that works?

Now that you have an example, I'll leave it to you to see if you can figure out the error in your title.

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