Fluttershy gets more than she asked for when she visits the Library and hears moaning from behind the door. Concerned that Twilight may have developed a problem, Rarity and Rainbow Dash go and investigate.
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Hee. Re-reading it from the start, the ending is obviously what was going on. Well played.
HaHa! I love it!
I actually expected this to involve a massage or something.
lolwut
I knew it was going to turn out to be a big misunderstanding. Good job!
Hehehe... Nice.
Love it.
Oh, that was awesome!
Dear Celestia, help me. I have reduced myself to writing cheap humor fics.
Bwahahahahahaha! This was priceless!
oh you!
"Having fun?" <--- best line ever
MY SIDES
That was absolutely, positively,
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That... was beautiful.
and...
dat ending...
I predict that this will get featured
986841
Let us hope!
986907
Good Luck, I really loved this story. It made me laugh harder at a fanfic than I have in a LOOONG time.
It's gonna take me awhile to clean the dirt out of my mind, but that was freaking hilarious
“Well, yeah. What did you think I was doing?” oh Twilight trust me when I say you don't want to know.
Damn, I was sure she was eating Ice Cream. Fyi, adult humor falls under the mature tag now.
987651
Only if it's explicit.
69 thumbs up achieved
This is a pretty cool fic right here.
I award you 1 point and may the unloved hate.
987682 I suppose dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Read the first 4 lines. Shes sleeping in. Isn't she.
Edit: whoo! Got it in one! But oh my, Flutters! She seems to be enjoying her nap almost indecently!
987682
Or it's suggested strongly enough - but that's up for the mods to decide.
What I think Cicero is doing when he's alone in a room making akward chuckling noises 0_o...
from the discription i thought this was a clop-fic i was wrong but it was still very enjoyable
Well.........that was, um, interesting.
Don't think I'll be reading one like this after
9 pints of Guinness again.
Still, got me laughing, a little to loud in the
pub though.
I knew right from the start.
She's not fapping, she's napping!
I was expecting a massage.
I was thinking ''Who in the hoof ,moans while sleeping?!''
I started yawning ,and layed down and streched and letted out a big moan ,when I had the story out of my mind.
I remembered this fic,and face-hoofed.
Edit :I knew this would happen!!It should be rated Mature ,so people don't know that it wasn't clop.
987682
This story did give me the same felling of Twilight's First Time ...Hehe...That was actualy one of the first fics Iv'e ever read....Hehe..
Congruats on getting featured ,by the way!
987651 Poor Broniestories...
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i think that described my reaction at this fic
I bet they were actually doing that though.
More dirty mindtricking story. Always keep up the good work, and please do more mindtricking story.
lolz
Right, this will blow your mind...
What if she was subconciously hoofing it while she was asleep?
Yup, cracked the fuck up at that one.
I have to say that this "clop-fic" was simply amazing. i couldnt help but emit a chuckle or two when i read was she was REALLY doing
This surpassed my expectations, and i hope to sample more of your amazing work in the future. keep up the good work
I expected yoga. :/
988479 Is that... A SKYRIM REFERENCE?!?!!?
Sweet Celestia... my sides hurt
"I can't wait to tell Princess Celestia I tried this
Absolute best line.
I caught myself thinking "Hmm, I wonder if the princess does it often!"
In all honesty, I had to read it twice. Or thrice. The lack of oxygen to my brain is making it difficult to remember.
This was absolutely hilarious. It somewhat reminds me of Friendly Uncle's work (Estrus, in particular), and I absolutely love it. Especially the ending... both the end of Twilight and the final bit after that.
Pure comic genius.
I lost my shit when Spike went in, and when she said she was sleeping in, I gave myself the world's hardest facepalm.
Hilarious I loved it that was so funny. BTW out of curiosity was Fluttershy "Hoofing it"
lol
I normally don't click things in the featured box too often, but I am very glad that I did here. This had me on the floor laughing. That touch at the end was amazing. Great work!
And a side note, no errors!
This is very good! Very good indeed.
So predictable. So very predictable.
THIS IS SO FUCKING BRILLIANT!
its great!