This is not my best work, but it's still here. the beginning was actually written before i found this site, but recently i've picked it up again. so, here you guys go. I hope you like it.

I wish I had time to at least begin this. Fortunately, I'm a sucker for OctaScratch, so a star to track for later is yours.

I see where this is going. I love to see Vinyl and Octavia together... It just seems right.

OMG!!!!! Love It helariously awsome.

Lol it seems like Vinyl to drug somepony then fuck them. I hope that they do end up together tho.

Awsome!! MORE... I WANT MORE!

THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!      ! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The fic reminds me to much of the plot to fight club

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i have never seen/heard of fight club, so any resemblance is totally coincedental. sorry

This is the best chapter (in my opinion) so far! I usually hate love stories but all these fanfics have me addicted now

Good chapter. But I hope that Octavia's parents find out, it would just be funnier that way.

Shit... I've been reading so many fanfics that I fogot everything up to now. I guess I have to start from the begining. AAWWW YYEEEAAAAHHH. 'Goes to first chapter'

Sweet two chapters in one day!!!! This is awsome. But kinda short

Dun dun duuuun! The suspense will now kill me until I read more! Moar!

Shit just got real!

Holy shit how did you do to get three new chapters in one bucking day... Oh well, I'm not complaining, more to read then.

Now about the story... BITCH YOU DON'T TALK TO TAVI THAT WAY ... Fiew now that I got that out of my system, awsome chapter can't wait for more. By what I've previously said hopefully today.  

Fear not, my bronies.

Moar is coming as fast as I can write. Which, I might add, is pretty damn fast. I'm about a third of the way through the next chapter already!

I'm liking this story more and more! The short and sweet updates keep me checking my email for updates lol. Have all of my likes!

Yay a fourth update today... I love that, you update so fast. But you should cool down a little cause then you might lose the ability to update fast and end up hardly updating at all. All that said, I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for all the likes and stuff. And, I must admit, two of the chapters i uploaded today were written yesterday, so i'm not quite so amazing as you might think. Also, this much time spent typing away at my computer merely indicates that I have no life whatsoever. But i don't give a flying buck. Ponies are my life, at the moment.

Octavia's father said jovially as they came downstairs and sat down t breakfast.

I really like your story (VinylxOctavia is my OTP) But your pacing seems a little fast. From "'Tav, that mare who helped me was your mother" to "Then it isn't my fault?" I was like: Octavia had an aunt? That raised Vinyl? And now she's dead just like that? I get that you're telling us a bit of their past while getting both of them through what just happened to them, but it seems a little... soap-opera-ish.

That said I like that they don't always get along, and have completely different viewpoints on everything. Vinyl's comment a chapter or two back of "Can we make out now?" sounded a lot like her! Overall it's a good story you've got going here and I definitely want to see more!

ok without a doubt this is a fabulously adorable chapter and good job on the story so far CharmingChaos

this was a good chapter but their was a few mistakes none to serious all in all fabulous

fabulous chapter i thought the mom would be the one to freak out i guess i was right but now what is the dad goingto say\do about what has just been said and what is going on also

I really liked what you did with Octavia's thoughts on all the homophobia, I thought it was quite interesting.

More on topic, great story! I'll definitely be tracking this

FABULOUS i like the not ending much better cant wait for the next installment of this chapter

Bravo sir, bravo, i can't wait for the next part

Awesomist

>>930371930371

Hehe. I'm a sir now.

Actually I'm a girl, but whatevs. Thanks!

fabulous chapter im glad this story updates so often its just awesome

It just keeps getting better and better

Can't wait for the next update. This is the first story I've read with these two ever, but I have to say you've formed my headcanon for them.

I do have some advice though...especially at the start, it feels rushed. Like...she was against having Vinyl, and then she isn't? After the first few chapters, I think it goes a lot smoother, but the start just feels rushed. Also, the part with the twin sister I don't think was needed-it just sorta confused me and I was like...why is that even there?

But yeah, love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Lol I read both. My favorite was the ending, but I wanted to read the not ending so that it wouldn't be the end... If you know what I mean. They were both perfect.

sorry for all the typos.

but I'm grounded from the computer until tomorrow, so proof reading will have to wait

Not bad. Kinda saw that coming though... but maybe that's because i read too much of these lol... anywho looking forward to the next part if there is one!

Awesome! When you added in the bit about the test, I thought she would be pregnant, but still, really good and emotional. I loved it. Yet again another great chapter!

MFW her mother went on her biggot-rant "NICE TRY BITCH!"  Anyways a great chapter with a admitedly half-assed ending that would be good for a childrens story but not a grown up's tale.

I cant wait to read the rest!

All of my gusta!

I still love how sweet their romance is, but I certainly think this pregnancy thing is a little silly. But oh well, it hasn't thrown me off too much!

Such a cute chapter. Wondering what all Vinyl's fears are up to, though... But yeah, cute chapter. Just wish there was more to it.

>>942767942767 The pregnancy thing is kinda weird, but I wanted them to have a filly--er, foal at some point, and Vinyl going to the doctor's just seemed like a good time for them to find out.

>>942878942878 More is coming. Just as soon as I decide whether it's a filly or a colt. It's a hard choice.

>>943014943014 If it helps, I vote filly. A colt would be cool, but...I dunno. Just think a filly would be better for them.

>>943014943014 I agree with PinkieShyy, I'd vote filly, then you could explore how different them raising a child would be to Octavia's parents raising her. More freedom and what not

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I thought filly as well. It just seems... right, y'know?

Sweet Moments like these make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside and man do I love it.

It's getting good, am i right to assume we'll be meeting the baby next chapter?

I cant wait to meet little Vintavia. (Okay, bad names to try to mix, specially when you arent good at it). Still, its exciting, since i wanna see how you've made their reactiins.

>>943883943883 I agree it's getting to the best part-- writing about little fillies is super fun!

>>944428944428 Hehe. Vintavia. But one of my best friends already gave me a name. But you won't find that out for a while. It's a secret.

Last two chapter were just fabulous can't wait for next to come out

Can't wait for the next chapter this is an awsome story.

little short but im loving this cant wait to see the little filly grow up (if its that long)

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I have to say that I'm surprised that anyone would like the, as >>934346934346 so rightly put it, "Half-assed" ending. But I kinda had to give Sonata a chance to not be so bitchy. (Is that even possible can a mare be bitchy?)

>>948185948185

Well that is quite impossible or else my stepmom would stop being a bitch. She is so much of a bitch that I've told her to her face and doesn't give a shit. (Poor, poor dogs must be insulted when we call her that )

P.S: This is out of subject but does anypony like dubstep? If so you should check out my Youtube chanel I will remix MLP songs. The name is MusicMaster1241 so far I only got one song and it's not MLP but that will come eventualy.

I really do like the chapter, but it seems... fast, a bit blurred.

Definitely not a bad thing! It helps with the mood and the sensation of the piece.

Thank you.

YAY the little filly's here i cant wait for the name and the sleepless nights they r about to go though.

She's here! And sounds so cute! Chapter was very fast, bit it fit well with the pacing of giving birth (at least, from an outside perspective, since I have only ever attended my nieces...) But another adorable chapter! I keep thinking something bad is going to happen soon though.

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As far as I know, you're wrong. But really, who can tell? My characters always seem to develop their own stories and leave me helplessly typing whatever they want me to, but as far as I can tell everything should be okay for a while.

>>956756956756 This chapter was supposed to be fast. Since the whole thing is from Octy's point of view, I couldn't just suddenly go and write from Vinyl's, and Octy wouldn't be allowed in the room, probably. So I couldn't really describe how Vinyl felt during it. Maybe she'll tell us later on, though.

Loved this chapter! The filly is finaly here and Vinyl experienced child birth. Keep this up, you are doing an excellent job.

P.S: I'm not sure about this one but you said 'Octavia played the most beautiful peace' where as it should be piece because it's a musical piece and not peace if you understand. Correct me if I'm wrong.

fabulous + adorable =+ fabable or adorabous and that sums up this chapter but still adorably fabulous chapter I loved it

Man i just love this

I prefer Wubsy

fabulously adorable i cant wait for the next adorable installment to be released

But..who's surname will she have? Another adorable update!

OMG! How can someone not like this story!

Those three are trolls

Tambourine... Realy.

Image: http://alltheragefaces.com/img/usercreated/4f71a5b48d4eb.png

I like this story! And I found an update! Tambourine!!! I like it!

..so cute omg

uhm... i think this is like the 3rd or 4th fic with Vinyl and Octavia where one of their homes is on fire... whats the odds?

Celestians = Just as ignorant as Christians (and any other religion for that matter)

And on a side note: I just became friends with around 80% of the world population :D

>>979168979168 yes. And I must say I was pretty happy with that name. Besides, what would YOU name her? Pizzicato? All of Octavia's relatives are assholes, so I can't name Tamby after any of them.

>>981294981294

Ok after a while of thinking Tamby sounds cute, but Tambourine is still kinda fucked up? Wubsy is cute... Nah stick to Tamby.

>>981143981143

Yes you did and for that comment you deserve 5 mustaches Yay for being with no religion!

CUTE and you were right, Tambourine is a great name. Keep up the great work!

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwww. 'nuff said

We shouldn't have been acting like that in front of you." She shook her head. "But Vinyl had it coming to her. no pony insults my music without getting insulted right back." - you missed a capital

Octavia and Tambourine spent the afternoon at the Park. - Found it

>>984889984889 *brohoof* How do you people notice stuff like this?

>>988909988909 We use our brony powers

Guess where I was when I wrote this chapter!

That's right, Rome!

So naturally, I had to put some of that in Canterlot - hence the Coltiseum lol.

I might not be interested in reading the story, but I'll give you a thumbs up purely because of the cover image.

Poor 'Tavi, she will never be able to feed her own filly. I loved this chapter and the name Tamby grew on me, now I think it is a great name!

Coming along very well, keep it up

>>993687993687 I don't know if I should be insulted or complimented on that one.

>>996227996227

Take it as a compliment for the good choice of a cover image. I was just browsing through.

>>895457895457

But she ended up getting drunk, too.

Basically, that makes it a little more okay.

My dear friend, the link is to the mobile version of youtube. Otherwise, excellent chapter!  I enjoyed the resolution of their quarrel.

I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter, I originally thought the filly thing was a little farfetched and might ruin it, but I think it's all playing out nicely. Good job

nice job

oh god the fabulousness of this chapter is to much this was great i love reading this story and the chapter just made me love it even more

Great job! Awesome chapter like all the other ones! yay

>>10136081013608

Well, shit. I should have expected that, I'm writing on my iPad. I'm currently on Vacation in Venice, (hence Ponezia) and I don't have a computer. But I will fix it as soon as I can. Thanks for pointing that out.

CharmingChaos out

i gotta feeling something bad is going to happen to tamby in the future

>>10273241027324

I agree

I hope nothing happens, I like Tamby~

If something happens to tamby, there will be hell to pay.

Tamby's gonna be fine... I hope.

another fabulous chapter and adorable i might add

"It's ok of you are, Tavi" - if*

But then she opened her yes fully - eyes

For pony's sake, guys, DON'T WORRY

As far as I  Know, nothing bad is going to happen to Tamby, at least not for a while.

And, by the way, aren't you ponies all hypocrites for all the sudden loving Tambourine so much?

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strange. but I had to get rid of Octavia's house somehow...

I see this story going until the two mares DIE and Tamby has had some sort of dilemma. I don't have a single problem with that and wouldn't even mind if that dilemma is mentally crippling for all involved! Still, a good chapter, loving the interaction, and I always did love little Tamby