not bad in writing........ though my problem is simply this. if rarity wants to harm others, the element would never have chosen her. the story was still rather itnresting but it does not account for that.
3514130 to be generous you ahve to have a want to give to others, a form of kindness. all rarity wants to do in this is take from others. take something completely irreplaceable. well written but is still the problem.
Just because you sometimes take from others does not mean that you cannot be generous after all Rarity still has to run a business, and that requires a lot of give and take.
3514277 difference between business exchanges for required materials and stealing the sanity and well being without any intention of giving it back, is rather.......... considerable i would say.
not bad in writing........ though my problem is simply this. if rarity wants to harm others, the element would never have chosen her. the story was still rather itnresting but it does not account for that.
Oh no, now Rarity's a monster in several languages.
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In Soviet Equestria, monster is a rarity!
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Now now, her element is Generosity not Kindness.
Great story, very interesting. I think you captured psychopathic Rarity very well.
3514130 to be generous you ahve to have a want to give to others, a form of kindness. all rarity wants to do in this is take from others. take something completely irreplaceable. well written but is still the problem.
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Just because you sometimes take from others does not mean that you cannot be generous after all Rarity still has to run a business, and that requires a lot of give and take.
3514277 difference between business exchanges for required materials and stealing the sanity and well being without any intention of giving it back, is rather.......... considerable i would say.
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Nah, their basically the same thing.