High school student Forte Heldentenor has moved to Canterlot with his parents and as such, has to start at a new school. The school in question is CHS.
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Seems okay so far. But I'd give your character some flaws if I was you. Seems a bit too perfect so far.
7176668 I will do. Thanks for the feedback and I'll think of some fitting flaws. I have no intention of making him a Gary-Stu.
I like the story so far. Does this story take place after or before Rainbow Rocks?
7176824 Before Rainbow Rocks. I knew I left something out of the description.
7176827 My mistake then. I didn't see it. Anyways... great story!
this seems a bit rushed but its good though
It's kind of fast paced but it's still good. Take some time and get down what you envision perfectly, even if it eats up a bit of time.
7179016 Thanks for the feedback. I'm looking at doing some minor edits to the chapters so I may be able to move some bits to the 3rd chapter and onwards.
I've put the story in hiatus while I iron things out.
excuse me, mr. Author, but you seem to be slipping into 2nd person.
you do realise that he can't read your writing in the same fancy voice that you are reading it in, in our head, right?
well excuse me for wanting to make it sound better to myself
7210151 Fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out.
7210166
that was quick
plus, you are welcome.
7210166 this gonna be updated or nah? its not on hiatus
7252647 It's going to be updated. I'll try and get it out tomorrow if I can.
7252650 k
7252656 I'm writing the chapter now but I might not get it out today. It will be out soon though. The chapter might be a bit bland but the sotry will pick up.
7254449 coolio
...a $5 bet where you pay double if you lose is just a $10 bet, is it not?