Mir'ra (POV)
As all of us enter the castle I do a shout to get aid for whatever comes at us next. "Slen Tiid Vo" I shout. When I do a skeleton of a dovah comes out of the ground and turns into a dovah from Nirn.
"What do you wish my master?" The dovah ask.
"I command you to help me in the defence of the ponies. Do not attack anything unless I say so. Also, do not kill anything I tell you to attack." I say.
"Yes, my master." The dovah says.
"Dovah what is your name?" I ask.
"It is Aragrath," Aragrath replied.
"We must cut this chat short though because I sense a Paal Rii." I say as we soon begin to move again through the castle to find the Elements of Harmony. Suddenly Nightmare Moon pops out of nowhere in front of us.
"I have had enough of your interference dragon. I will kill you and cast EQUESTRIA INTO EVERLASTING NIGHT. HAHAHA." Nightmare ranted. Unknown to her Mir'ra was going to use a special shout to slow her down.
"Gaan Lah Haas" I shouted. When the shout hit Nightmare Moon she was then weakened.
"Ah. What did you do to me dragon?" Nightmare Moon asked enraged. "I will make you PAY." Nightmare shouted as she flew towards me.
"I have already accepted Dinok Nightmare Moon so do your worst." I challenged. As soon as those words left my maw she stabbed me right in the heart.
"You think you are so powerful creature well..." Nightmare Moon suddenly stopped with the realization that she killed something that was as powerful as her. SHE COULD HAVE USED IT AGAINST THOSE PESKY PONIES!!! As Nightmare Moon removed her horn from me I noticed something amazing.
Then they all realised something. "MIR'RA!!!" They all shouted together. Mir'ra awoke to the sound of them calling his name. As he wakes up he sees two new ponies. Well...one is more like a horse.
"Hello, my *cough cough* friends," I say. "May I ask who are *cough cough* these two?" I ask.
"They *sniff* are Princess Celestia and Princess Luna," Twilight explains.
"Ah. So Luna was *cough cough* Nightmare Moon correct?" I ask. Luna shook her head. "I have *cough cough* no hard feelings. It wasn't you Luna *cough cough* and I know that." I say wheezing.
"Thank thee for understanding. We are grateful for thou's forgiveness." Luna says while trying to hold back tears.
"I am sorry to say, girls *cough cough* but my time is done. I am about to dir." I say.
"No no no. Mir'ra stay with us." Twilight cried into my chest.
"Don't worry kiir I will always be with you," I say smiling.
"Mir'ra?" Twilight ask.
"Yes Twilight." I say.
"How do I put this...um...I am in love with you," Twilight says making everyone but me gasp. She then puts her small and soft lips on my big and scaly ones. When she kisses me she blushes.
"I love *cough cough* you *cough cough* to *cough cough* Twilight," I say taking in my last breath. As I die I hear crying.
"No no no. Mir'ra stay with me." Twilight cried. Suddenly she stopped. She and every pony else hear a strange noise. As they look around all the ponies even the princesses see something from Mir'ra. A memory. It is physically playing and every pony can see.
Why is there no words :( I was liking reading the story.:(
I'm not sure what depresses me more, the fact that someone wrote this, the fact that a moderator approved this, or the fact that four people liked it
This is my first one so give me some slack
6919951 You put youtube videos into your chapters, the slack ship set sail and crashed one metre from the harbour, I am all out of slacks to give, if I had a penny for every slack I could offer I would be broke as shit... basically what I'm trying to get at is that I will not cut you slack, although I won't bother properly critiquing this as I'm certain it's a trollfic (and if it isn't, then I strongly suggest you pretend it is as it's the only way you're going to salvage anything from it)
Hey man chill. I am coming out with a new one soon so hold your horses
Wow reeve...you need to think before you type...not everyone is a professional when they start something...I know for a fact I wasn't when I started...and I am still new to this.
Yay...Aragrath lives...AGAIN!!!
6915312 Now there are words...YAAAY
twi?
why sooo fast is is twi so spontanius it's like the nostalgia critic ep were he said it was like if in aliens (2) that (don't remember name) robot guy said to riply (i love you) it's just soooo.. sudden
So good sir/madam, shall this be continued? If you need help, give me a call, for I am able and willing.