Shadow and Light... two magnificent entities are going out of hand but no pony knows. Everyday feels like their normal day as they go about their normal lives... doing their normal things as each day just makes the unknown end come closer and closer...
[Hey, it's going to be a huge step out of me being insecure and shy about my writing but I am finally doing this story, the story is mainly going to be huge... a large adventure of my OC, there's going to try a chapter a day and if that ends up being a bit much on me I'll just do 1 bi-daily... I was not sure if "Sex" needed to be checked due to there being no intercourse... there will be however, sexual references such as mating and rape. (Don't worry, none of these happen but they are mentioned.) So I hope you Readers enjoy the story!]
I'm not sure what to say XD but there's your first like
6430099 Thank you so much!
Ummm... I really want to say that you are making references to "that game".
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Many references are in fact going to be in this story So, you are right about that but don't worry, there will not be any actually intercourse as said in the description, only instances where it is referenced.
P.S. I haven't played the game myself, nor am I a clopper. I did watch a friend go through the horrors of playing it though... His reactions were entertaining X3
6445724 Ah, okay XD
Lol Zelda reference
I wonder why Celestia is here....
Also I'm probably the only one reading this story and it's still great I like how the names of new ponies turn to colors and stuff lol
6663353 Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story and I have plenty more to come!
Keep going. You've made me curious.
6883564 I'm glad it caught your interest :)
Should be replaced with ponies. Other than that, it's good so far. Man, I need to re-read the entire story... it's been a while....
3 spewky 5 me
6884301 Fixed it. :3
You could certaintly do more with less.. 'Action packed' areas in the the story. And maybe you should attempt to get to know Rainbow Dash's personality a bit more, I feel like she isn't herself.
6886612 I apologize for the "action-packed" parts of the story but I like action like that. As for the Rainbow Dash personality thing I didn't really try to make it completely her in this chapter as it was merely a fake one. I don't know how I did with the other chapters considering a wrote them quite a bit ago, but I will try to improve on it for future chapters.
Thank you :)
its an odd story but fun nonetheless
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Thank you! lol