Well, It took the night, but certain alterations in the first four chapters of Book One were made as well as some minor adjustments to chapter 7...

Enter Wheat Wacker, a unicorn stallion who is actually a skeptic when it comes to Tyler. His role is more that of someone being a minor adversary beside the void creatures in the first four chapters. While most of the ponies simply believe Tyler to mean them no harm, he doesn't buy it.

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So... I was thinking and musing... And after some brainstorming, I thought of something. The most critique I got for these four pesky chapters (and their pesky dog). What was/is missing was/is a counterbalance to Tyler. Someone expendable who could disappear at one point in time once the story continues. Over the next few months I'm going to make some changes to the first four chapters of Book One in order to implement a character retroactively. He will be gone by the

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