So my pre-reader hasn't reported back to me yet. That's completely understandable, after all he said that he wouldn't always have the time to look over my stories; so really there's no reason to be surprised. But I'm pretty sure my dear loyal readers have been waiting a while, and some of them may not be as immensely patient as I. In that event, I'm going to post up the story unedited anyway. When my pre-readed does come back, I'll simply hide that chapter. If you wanted to see