I don't know how that happened or if I still have despite being mostly better today, but I wanted you guys to know that.

I love great slapstick. It's one of my favorite forms of comedy overall.

"Alright, Odium," Twilight said, sternly. "As the new rulers of Equestria…"

Odium stood firmly, sweating a bit as he waited for what's to come.

"We've decided to sentence you… to at most a few weeks of community service."

"Huh?" Odium asked.

"You know, doing odd jobs to help other creatures for a few weeks. You'd love that, right?."

"Th-that's it?!" He stuttered.

"Well, yeah. You've stopped yourself from trying to hurt us, so…"

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After a lot of thinking over the years about how to get my stories and OCs right in terms of execution, I've decided to quit making them and/or get rid of them entirely. Thank you all for your support.

They barely show the characters' redeeming qualities at the start of the arc instead of the end. And they also usually show only the more violent and villainous side of the villain/antagonist instead of showing a more friendly and affable villain that routinely gets along with the heroes. For example, most of the MLP and Steven Universe redeemed villains. We barely get to see them as more than just villains before they get instantly get redeemed at the end through only a sad backstory or noble

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Based off of this:

Endless goodness, endless grace
A light that spreads through time and space
All the pain will surely break
Only in dreams can we all make it

Sounds of hatred, eldritch horns
Cry for the one from nothing born
All that’s bad will now be gone
Now come, false hero from beyond!

When you look into the stars
You’ll see the light dispelling all the dark
The zion, living

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He has a point.

Clockwork's Diagnosis

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Hey, everyone. I know I've been extremely absent from this and I'm sorry for that, but after making some choices on which villain to critique next, I've decided that first and second choices will be done on possibly the same day since they're from the same medium. Again, sorry for taking so long.

Anyway, let's go over the rules:

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Hey there, everyone. The upcoming story is already done, but before I start publishing it, I need some feedback to tell me what needs to be fixed as a whole. Unfortunately, I couldn't find anyone else to help me, so I decided to make a blog to ask if anyone would want to help me. If not, then just tell me why and I'll stop asking entirely as well as just publish it anyway.

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Comedic Gold!

All they talk about is only Equestria and not the other kingdoms. They think that only their land matters and not the other ones when that's not true. Why won’t anypony acknowledge the other kingdoms instead of just Equestria?

They need to actually care about the other kingdoms and creatures and not use or hurt them for their own benefit and only for their home without the other homes outside of Equestria.

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One of my favorite songs from one of my favorite movies.

Including Sid's stories. If so, should I either wait until I improve my writing or never make another one at all. I'm not trying to guilt-trip or bother anyone. I just wanted to know what people think I should do and why. Can someone give me the answer?

I made it from a site that's similar to Photoshop called Photopea.

What do you think?

In terms of personality, backstory, design, etc., what do you think I should change Odium into make him a better OC/character and why? Can someone give me a specific answer for how to do that besides just vague answers like "his existence" or "make him better"?

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Besides on Discord or here in Fimfiction. Because every time I come to Discord or Fimfiction, it's usually for the same reason: to promote my stuff and selfishly bother others/disregard others' stuff without taking the time to think for my self or others' content.

Sorry about that.

Because I think that's started to be that way. My OCs, my stories, my wiki pages, all of them are bad and can never work, no matter what I do. I shouldn't come up with an idea at all. Maybe that will be the answer.

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