The final chapter is finally up. I like how this turned out and I want to give a big thanks to everyone who has been following along. I do hope the ending, messages and feel of this finale meet expectations and it was a fun and thoughtful ride. It was nice working with lesser used characters and if you are a fan of them I'd like to think I've done them justice. Enjoy.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 870 views

Chapter five is up and we're in the home stretch now as the next chapter will be the finale to the story. Still not much traction with this one, but at the same time it has no downvotes so I can't complain. If you are keeping up with the story then thank you and I hope the conclusion satisfies. See you at the end.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 870 views

With chapter 4, we're at the meat of the story where the second round of confrontations details more of Zephyr, Marble and Snips' deep rooted feelings about their lives. This point in the story is the fundamental idea I had when I first came up with the idea for this story; so I hope it impacts in all the right ways as I'm am not trying to force unnatural or out of character motivations. I can genuinely see these three feeling this way based on what has happened and how they are used and

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Chapter 3 is done, after some delay due to work load. So far, this story isn't exactly setting the site on fire; which may be the folly of using less popular characters. Even so, I don't intend to abandon the idea. Again, feel free to share whatever you may think or find within the story. Enjoy.

ECan You See Me Now

• MLP: FiM
• Adventure
• Drama

Zephyr Breeze, Marble Pie and Snips set themselves on their friends and family after receiving greatly enhanced abilities from an unknown Unicorn.

• Snips
• OC
• Main 6
• Marble Pie
• Zephyr Breeze

Marezinger Z · 19k words  ·  20  1 · 870 views

Chapter 2 of my new story is finally up. I've still got family coming and going so my work on this has been slower than usual; speaking of which, Happy New Year to everyone. In this chapter, our three focuses make their appearance after their encounters with Renaissance and definitely leave an impact. The important thing I want to get across with this story is that Zephyr, Marble and Snips may come off as out of character but that is the entire point. How this all works gets

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Can You See Me Now is a story I've been wanting to write for awhile now but have workshopping endlessly. I finally reached a point where I felt the only thing to do was just write it and rely on feedback. This is the first story that I am going in without 100% confidence in its totality. I know how it starts, I know how it ends and I have key scenes in place but other than that I am playing it by ear. So for this one, I'm really asking for feedback on how you all think it is stacking up

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