Chapter three is live again, and sorry for the chapter spam, if that's what happens when republishing a formerly published chapter.

Major changes and minor changes:
*Trixie is less dumb.
*Sunset's sense of urgency is better carried through the chapter. Tension increased, I think. The chapter better matches the 'crisis' part of its title.
*What happened to the Royal Guard? Nopony knows, and now Twilight and Sunset are worried for Shining Armor.

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I'm pulling chapter 3. I got ahead of myself and posted an incomplete chapter, and for that, I'm so sorry. I'm at work atm so this will be a bit sloppy, but here's my sorry reguardless. I failed to deliver on several fronts when I posted this chapter, leaving to playing Trixie as dumber than she actually is, lacking tension by underplaying reactions to the potentail to permanant daylight, as well as failing to address the fate of the royal guard. I also failed to deliver Luna's reasons to

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