Wow, someone else was inspired to do a different take on the duel story idea (two stories in one writing).

Check out Scribblestick's story Between the Lines. It's also a bit dark for those of you who like that sort of thing. Overall I think it was done better than mine but it's hard to tell as I am very hard on myself. I do think he used the mechanic better.

So. I've come to a conclusion. My stories will never be popular on this site. My most recent story was an experiment on a duel story, that is two stories told with one set of words. Depending on how you read it changes which story you are reading.

Was it a perfect story?
No.
Was it a decent story?
I'd say it was decent and when people checked it out they liked it.

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