I hope this rework is more coherent and the added backstory works to flesh out the story and bring the main character some much needed personification in the intentionally vague first chapter.

My revised 1st chapter is almost done and then I will be getting to work on the second chapter. This is just a quick status update nothing more really. I am going to see Kung Fu Panda 3 today, I hope its as good as the first two.

I've begun to write an hour a day at least, even if I have to throw away whatever I have written because it wasn't inspired I will continue to write each day. Hopefully with time this will help me refine my writing skills and foster a pleasant habit of writing constantly.