I have now done the final edit of "That Could Have Ended Better" with a record 8th draft. Anyway, I just did some reformatting, small grammar changes and every little thing I could tweak, all done to the best of my writing skill. Best of luck to everyone in the The Equestria Daily Outside Insight Summer Fanfic. Love the challenge but if it gets people to notice me, or if I get an honourable mention, or dare I say, even win, it would all be a bonus.

The Phoenix Rising