New Chapter · 11:57pm Jul 24th, 2014
Chanter 4 of Thirteen Moons is now up.
Chanter 4 of Thirteen Moons is now up.
Dear Readers,
I've just posted a revised version of the third chapter of Thirteen Moons. Hopefully, it addresses all of the issues that were brought up by various readers. But that is not all I wished to discuss with you.
Let me start off by saying that I apologize for saddling you all with my burdens. But anyway, the criticisms left by MythrilMoth in his/her recent comment have been weighing heavily on my mind as of late. Because of them, I've considered making serious revisions to the third chapter of Thirteen Moons. Among other, smaller fixes, I intend to perform a complete overhaul of Twilight's character, and more importantly, I am considering the complete removal of the more "video game-like" elements from
The new chapters for Thirteen Moons are up. Yes, chapters, as in more than one. The second chapter ended up so long that I had to break it up into two parts.