Promises was my first real story on here, it garnered enough support to let me know my writing had a plae on this website. It's not perfect but I'm still proud of it.

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I breifly flirted with the idea of rewriting Promises. It was my first completed non one shot story it also achieved a level of popularity high enough to show me that my writing had a place here. Looking back at it, I don't hate it, but there are some things I would change.

So in the interest of turning my critical gaze inward and publically admitting my faults, here's what's wrong with Promises

1. There was no buildup

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