Cleaning up Ain't Done With These F****** · 10:30pm Apr 22nd, 2016
When I wrote that, I was an angsty, angsty teen whom's mother had recently left, so I took my frustration out on that. As a result, I rarely even re-read what I wrote. I've done the first chapter, added more flair to the sentences, given Alice an actual, proper personality, stopped with the semi-mary sue bullshit I had going on (Trust me, I'm going to fucking curbstomp her power. I'm talking Hexes in DS2 level of nerfing.)