Dang it. · 7:37pm May 7th, 2014
Thank you for submitting your story to Equestria Daily, but, unfortunately, I cannot recommend posting it at this time. Due to the high volume of stories we receive on a daily basis, we cannot give specific feedback. Our Editor’s Omnibus contains a thorough list of the issues we look for in our reviews, and also contains resources for finding proofreaders and editors. Give it a look, as it will go a long way toward improving your writing!
Sincerely,
Pre-reader 63.546