Ok... I have decided to can this story. Its just all over the place in terms of quality, pacing, and even I'm getting burned out trying to do this story; so this version is getting cancelled. That doesnt mean this is the end for the Bear and Bird; I've decided to remake this story. With the experience I've made over the years since the original story I've wanted to remake it for a while. Hope to see you all in the new version.