Please forgive me for being an absolute failure of getting this story done right. I keep putting myself in a dead end so many times now and once again I failed to get it right and have to start over.
BUT I PROMISE! THIS WILL BE THE LAST TIME.
Sorry for the inconvenience everyone but I just want to let you know that later today I'm going to release an extension to chapter one and not too long after that a brand-new chapter two.
The invishimmer chapter will be taken down, but it will retun as in chapter four with a few changes, and more.
I'm just trying to get out everything about Sunset's character in the best way possible. As well as get all my ideas out properly as well.
I just want to say that I'm redoing chapter 2. I will keep the original up for now until the new version comes out.
The reason for the change is that I want to do things purely my way. I originally intended to make this story a more detailed version of the story InvisiShimmer as well as a continuation of that story. That is still the case of course, but I want to do things a little different for when Sunset goes to Fluttershy's house.