I almost doubled the word count so it is no longer just a bloated flash fic. It is now a proper short story with a much better flow! I added a lot of detail to the city, had Green tease them much more (including a short booty dance), and in general slowed the pace of the action way down. This time it is a FAR more exciting story and definitely worth reading if you haven't already or were a bit disappointed. Beware the first 5 or 6 paragraphs, and the last 2 or 3, are MOSTLY unchanged

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