so i decided to just entirely uplift this little sequel in order to just rewrite it from the ground up. the main thing with the bald ostrich, was that it had a goal in mind. with the original version of New Horizons, it did not. don't worry though, the rewrite is being worked on and should be up sometime tomorrow/the day after. there will still be Chryssy, Blaze, two assholes that need to get laid. oh, and it'll be better written, too.

so, I've been rereading the Bald Ostrich title, New Horizons, and have been thinking that I should write for it again. Right now, I am currently just rewriting the existing chapters, while removing a couple, namely the ones where Ostri becomes an alicorn. I am still going to keep a few things the same. Once every chapter is rewritten/edited, I will start writing for it again and it will go back online. It maybe a tiny bit jarring; I like to believe I've gotten better at writing since

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what if I wrote an alternative where Luna actually gave Ostri another chance? And overtime, Ostri figures out their relationship is completely bullshit?

i may have it end differently with Ostri dying in some way, shape or form. i may not. i mainly just wanna know your thoughts about this idea.

So I’m already working on the beginnings on the sequel to Dawn of a New Day. First chapter’s draft; it’s going through the editing stages before it is published.

also working on a title.

here’s the first draft

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so i got chapter 5 mostly done, and i believe some thoughts would be nice.

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just would like some thoughts:

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so this is basically the finished product, it just needs to be edited, but I took chapter in a different direction. I would like to know your thoughts:

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so I’ve been rewriting chapter 3 for this story and have a rough draft. i would like your thoughts:

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so I’ve been told that after the night sucks, and I kinda agree. So if you are wondering where chapters 2 and 3 are, I am currently rewriting them, completely redoing them and changing what i had in mind.

essentially i am rewriting everything after chapter 1.