So...for those of you that read the first chapter. I'm looking for feedback.
http://www.strawpoll.me/11638218
I'm looking to figure out what I should write in future chapters. If you'd like, feel free to submit to the poll, leave a comment here, or anything really. I want to write what people would like to read, and to know what y'all want to read, well, the best way is probably to ask you!