Well this happened quicker than I thought. I have now taken out all the more expletive swearing from the story and replaced it with a little less offensive alternatives. The characters are still rough gang ponies and thus don't speak very nicely, most of the times, but hey the story qualifies now for a T rating.

I originally wrote A day in the life of Rain Storm, mostly as an experiment and to have a little fun with Barricade's gang, show how they live their lives before Possession and In old Manehattan. The biggest experiment was basically removing the censoring I actually do on my more dubious characters.

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Oh wow, I didn't realise how quickly this auto approval system worked.

At any rate the first chapter of the former one shot now two chapter story, A day in the life of: Rain Storm is up. Find it here:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/336946/a-day-in-the-life-of-rain-storm

Chapter 2 will probably be posted tomorrow or Thursday, depends various things.

Warning though, it is rated M due to strong language and some violence.

Enjoy