So a few days ago Timmyrill , offered to edit my story!! I said yes, so he did (and super fast as well). And his editing was amazing!!!! He may as well right the rest of my story! And it was also his first time editing as well. So he did an amazing job! I havent added his editing to the story yet, but will get round to it soon. So just saying thanks to his amazing work! And please can you also go follow Timmyrill coz he's awesome!! Thanks guys!