So before I leave this country (US) next week, I will release another story.

I have to ask because I don't see too much of it... What do you all think of first person present tense? Is it interesting or does it take away from the story?

The idea, like the last Twilight's Journal, is she is reading a journal entry and is imagining it happening in real time as she reads. I'm not sure that translates very well though. Let me know what you all think.

I always get that rush of anxiety when I click submit. 'It's going to get like 2 likes and 20 dislikes...' but so far it's been well received. As has everything else I've written thus far. Thank you all.
This was my first attempt to write first person. I think I like first person better. It was easier for me to write for one.

Hope you liked a Ponified Italy.