Jan
29th
2014
For those of you who've read Fishbowl · 6:44pm Jan 29th, 2014
I submitted Forever Inside A Fishbowl to the Royal Guard yesterday, and apparently these were the reasons why it was rejected. I thought some of you might be curious.
—Lack of Conflict
—Lack of Story
—Punctuation Issues (Comma Splices)
—Frequent Typos
Make of it what you will, but that lack of story one really cracked me up!
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