I have the first two chapters edited to make it read better, and I still have to finish editing the rest of the chapters. I'm still working on it, Equestrian Flame is still being worked on, I'm just a little busy with other stuff right now. It will get done.

I finished editing the first chapter of Equestrian Flame, but I don't know if you guys want me to post the edited chapters as I finish them, or post them all at once. I will say though, that the first chapter was changed completely, and only resembles the original chapter in a few aspects.

Im going to start fixing some things with this story tomorrow, since I was giving a rage review of how to fix it more then a year ago. Today I am too busy dealing with the painful itchiness of a sunburn and tiredness of everything that has been going on.

I checked the notebook I have for this story on the new chapter I haven't even finished, and it is horribly shitty. I involved spike mining in dog country, Rapidash meeting the dogs, and Rapidash trying to get into a fucking battle with Sweetie Belle, thinking she is hiding Rarity.

Also its written terribly, and Twilights freak out that is needed looks like it was written to make her look dumb as shit. What was I doing?

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Sometime this week, I am going to be editing, adding, and fixing some problems that the story has to make it better. I asked someone to review it in the rage review group, since I needed someone to tell me its issues besides POKEMON! and I got what I needed. So, expect some new added and deleted stuff in the story.

More tired then anything...went to bed at like 1AM or something last night because I had trouble sleeping. The next chapter of Equestrian Flame has been half done for awhile now, but I had to revise the chapter once before because I resolved Twilights fear of Rapidash in like...a paragraph, so a persons suggestion that Twilight keep scared of her for awhile made me revise it. Now I'm on a wild goose chase with Spike and diamond dogs and Rarity and Sweetie belle in a messy boutique because

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For Equestrian Flame, I am considering writing some sort of odd hearts and hooves day non canon chapter special, my problem is I have no idea what stallion would go up to her, give her a card, and ask her to be his valentine, one if any at all. Maybe the Christmas holiday special chapter was just a one of a kind thing...

Any ideas?

I am going to try free hand drawing tomorrow, but I have gotten better and drawing the basic base of a pony, all except for the mane and the tail, which I am trying to figure out at this moment, and hope to get better at tomorrow. A few secret projects from me are going on, as well as me going to finish the new chapter to Equestrian Flame, which I hope to have out by Sunday, or maybe even late tomorrow.

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Does she normally just have really strong hooves, or is her strong hooves that can break anything one of her moves? Because if it is a move she can use in a battle, I cant use it, as she has none of her Pokémon abilities in my story.

Someone said they would make me a cover art instead of the current one. What I want to know is do you like it? Should I keep the current cover or change it to this one?

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So you guys know about this whole writing process and about why it takes me so long to update. As told here with a beautiful diagram. Recently I felt that the new chapter I was writing had a bit of a problem...I made Twilight trust Rapidash again too quickly, and I had to start over. Since I am doing so, I want to show you what I had written, courtesy of my phone. Which

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I need a bit of help. I don't have any ideas about what to write for the next chapter of Equestrian Flame. Well...no ideas that make sense for it. I need your guys help here.

So apparently where I live in lil old Massachusetts, we are going to have snow going on so bad that they not only canceled school for tomorrow, but Friday as well. They cancelled two days even before something happened. Must of been something horribly heavy to make Massachusetts close its schools down. So that's great, looks lime I wont have to play hooky after getting my hair cut to my neck tomorrow like I thought.

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Do me a favour guys, if it has any mistakes or issues with grammar, can you guys tell me in the comments so I can fix it?

I just finished writing chapter 5 of Equestrian Flame, and will begin typing it out later. Cant give away much, but it has a fight scene, and as close to a cliffhanger as I know how to do...

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The cutie mark is correct for him and everything...

Anyone in equestrian flame following that story see this blog? Say in the comments so I know it works please as I eat my cookies and milk.