The titles said it, go and read it if you want. It is not golden, but I promise you it's WAY better now than the unedited version.

Hey, guys, maybe you don't hear so much from me, but here's something I've got to tell you... okay the title said it already.

Here is a little list of the changes:

-Improved grammar, with my 2014 english knowledge. Maybe not perfect aka golden, but WAY better than first.
-Improved end (in grammar).
-Written in past tense, with better grammar.
-Changed here and there some things (No unnecessary Mary Sues *CoughBlack NeedlerCough*)

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