Princess Celestia's Surprise Cameos (Compilation) · 5:12pm Dec 27th, 2022
As the MC's mentor and initially last ruling alicorn, perhaps it was natural that Princess Celestia got the occasional cameo every now and again?
As the MC's mentor and initially last ruling alicorn, perhaps it was natural that Princess Celestia got the occasional cameo every now and again?
Cadence is best Princess.
Cadence is also very frustrating to be a fan of sometimes.
I absolutely loved her appearance in this most recent episode, displaying a great deal of competence and maturity despite being ultimately unable to stop Spike's downward spiral. Honestly, she's half the reason I enjoyed it so much.
BUT.
YAKS SMASH SPOILERS!
Ahem. After 'Princess Spike,' it's great to see an episode where the humour works so well. Where we got some very nice in-character writing and excellent timing. My only bones to pick are that once again Spike gets slammed by a door, and the Yaks blew up at everything possible. Here I think the writers could have either used the Rule of Three or had the Yaks show silent disapproval until something bigger makes them SMASH.
Chapter 7 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I hope you like it. This is the chapter where Greengrass is finally making his move against Trixie. His plan will finally come in full motion next chapter. Also, next chapter this fic will surpass the first story in word count. Isn't it strange how sequels tend to be longer than the original? Of course, Nevermore was a lot simpler than White Raven, so it really shouldn't be that surprising. I suppose as one grows as a writer
So, the last two weeks of the show have been interesting haven't they? I mean we got a prank/zombie episode and then we got a changeling episode. It's a pretty big time for the show with new lessons to learn and all. Or not.
I want to make it clear that anything is subject to change. This is just the rough ideas of what I want to do. I decided to do a Sluttification story for each of the mane characters, all 8 of them. Yes, Starlight and Spike get some love. Now, The names, Pictures, Fetishes, Description, and everything else will be changed or kept depending on if people seem to like or hate it. I really like some of them, and think others could use some work. Hopefully I don't have to change much, and if I do I
Hey again. The second chapter of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is done! This chapter basically sets up what has been happening with Trixie and other Galaxy Rangers since their secret identities have been revealed. I thought it would be nice to address the good and bad of it. This chapter also has a magic show and that was super fun to write if a bit difficult. Can you guess how Trixie did these tricks? The last trick was inspired by
Hey again. Chapter 8 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. Recently, I have been trying to work on my editing. I am using several programs like Grammarly to help me out. I am terrible at editing. I think it is going along rather well. I still feel my writing is a little too simple, though. That is something I really need to work on. I really hope I don't write so simply that my writing is boring and doesn't grab anyone's attention. Ah, the perils of being a writer.
Chapter 17 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I am a little surprised how often the Mane 6 keep showing up. I suppose I just like using them as supporting characters. Plus, I like writing Pinkie. I try to balance her craziness with being reasonable and intelligent at the same time. I don't like having her random for the sake of being random and have some method to how she thinks. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the chapter.
Nova Quill/Firimil took some time yesterday to channel the cosmic powers that be and create new art for AAS, or as she puts it "Justice3442 's muse ran away with mine to play and wouldn't give her back until it was done". She was very happy that I "liked" it.
Hey again. Another update! This chapter was a lot of fun to write. Fight scenes are hard, but rewarding to write. I always feel exhausted after writing one and they require a lot of effort and energy. Part of the difficulty of doing them is making sure they make sense in my head. I end up rewriting them over and over again because I feel something doesn't work for me. This can make writing slow and frustrating and I often have to take breaks. I find working in small chunks helps. Anyway, I hope
Hey again. Chapter 21 of Lunaverse: Galaxy Rangers - The White Raven is finished. I don't want to spoil anything, but this is the chapter you all have been waiting for. I wasn't sure I would even be able to make it this far. I had a thousand different ideas how this chapter would go. For the longest time, I wasn't sure exactly how this would play out. Somehow I got it done though, and I am pretty happy with how it turned out. I hope you enjoy the chapter.
Hey again. There will be one more chapter after this then the epilogue. The next chapter will be a bit longer than usual. I just have so many plot points that need to be resolved. Sigh. Hopefully, it wouldn't take too long to finish it. I'm mostly already done with the chapter. I think it might end up one of my favorites. It has a Luna and Trixie conversation that I really enjoyed writing.
Well, this month is going to have some good things and some slow things. For now here is the basic schedule. Also, I will put down the dates for April as well.
March 15th - Twilily Saga: Past, Present Or Damnation - Chapter 2: The Darkest Mare.
Sometime between March 16th and March 29th, I will be posting an origin story for Night Fright. The story is mostly done, and I do have a proofreader. We just need to work out the final pieces now.
PINKIE PIE: "Yeah... probably not my finest hour here. Making copies of yourself to hang out with all your friends at the same time - let's just say it's not nearly as fun as you might think!"
Heya readers,
First up, big props to Nova Quill who has decided to evict the imagery my story has brought to her brain in the best way possible.
Art!
First we have Judgelestia!
Next up, Spike channels his EqG self as he stares at Flurry Heart and ponders the mystery if all those feathers.
For a "Season 11", I would love Hasbro to achieve these basic goals:
1. Give the Knights of Order a redemption arc -- finally uniting the Elements of Patriotism with the other sets of Elements.
(The Knights temporarily lose connection with their Elements -- because their murderous hate starts making them harsh and selfish toward their own subjects. The message is this: You don't love your own country if you don't care for the people who live in it.)
Starlight: "Oh, I'm sorry, MLP writers, was that archival freezing beam meant for my backstory? Yeah, no, we're not doing that. Looks like you just tossed out all the plot setup across this season's map episodes! What a shame…"
1. Smolder
2. Spike
3. Fountain
4. Tumble