Just to let you know that I'm still alive and doing stuff. I'm 8.5k into chapter five, and I just need to fill in a few blanks, get some accents right, and make a good chapter closer. Also re-read it so to fix all the spelling errors before handing it over to be edited. It was an exiting chapter to wright and after some thinking, and mostly waiting till I was nearly done, I do have a good name for it too. 'Corps Brigade' so any fans of my last story, you know what's coming up.

So it's been a bit of time, but here it is, chapter 4. Not much to say here but enjoy. I'm satisfied with the setup, but like most of my work it's far from perfect. Looking at this chapter, If I were to put in all the deals I think it needs to be a truly epic chapter, it be around 20k long, and not the over 9k that it is. And knowing from my own time spent reading Fo:E story's, 20k takes along time to read. This is why Chumming Water had much shorter chapters, and why this story has longer. I'm

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Not everyone can have an open schedule, but with the rough draft done, it's all up to the editor to fix my mistakes. Well in between that time there is a hole lot of not much going on. I could have spent that time with the next chapter, something I was panning on doing sooner, but life likes to call you up and ask you to do overtime.

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Hello everyone, I finally have chapter three out after lots of writing, and lots of editing. I already started chapter four, and for any readers of my earlier story's, keep an eye out for a nice treat in it, when it comes out.

So I leave you with a questions, what's more likely to make you pee yourself: a needle coming at your eye, or a big monster just coming at you?

So here it is, there's not much to say but enjoy. It took me some time to get this down, with the longer chapter, and more world building, it was a real trip. One that I will see t the end.

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