Part Three of my musings about my original set of characters in The Apprentice, The Student, And The Charlatan after the break.
About a month ago, I wrote a blog post about Nova's evolution over the past five years, so I figured I'd do one for Aegis too. This one probably won't be near as long or as sentimental. I just thought I'd do one for Nova, one for Aegis & Sharp Eye, one for Envy, and one for the fic as a whole on the anniversary itself.
Musings on the bash brothers after the break.
This is something I figured I would post as I come up on the 5-year anniversary of first posting The Apprentice, the Student, and the Charlatan. I'm writing this more for myself than any readers out there, but figured "Hey, if you want to read my thoughts and feelings about my own imaginary friends, that's up to you guys." It does feel like it's going to be a long post, so bear with me.
Apprentice got a TVTropes Page.
If that's not my crowning achievement, I don't know what is.
Usual updates.
I'm not dead. Chapters are going. Work sucks.
Anywho, I've finished one special, am halfway through the second, and probably 10% into the third, so I'm staying mostly on schedule to be out on April 1st.
Also, Chapter 3 of TATSATC's audio drama was released today.
I added a little scene to the end of Chapter 15, and this has affected dialogue between Clover and Nova on the battlements in Chapter 16. Give it a read
Normally, I wouldn't be this interactive with chapters I've finished and don't think I'll be touching, aside from grammar fixing and such, but with the audio drama, I felt like Nova, Clover, and Steel needed one more scene in the middle to really cement the dynamic before their farewell.
As before, a few changes to the chapter. Starting with a new chapter name!
1) A new scene at the beginning to recap what's happened in the week after Chapter 5. My previous editor told me it was boring before, when it was purely exposition. I heeded his words and had Nova thinking back the entire time. Think it worked out better that way.
It's about 7k words in, and I think it's going to be a bit longer than its original incarnation.
There's going to be an additional scene, in which Twilight and Celestia discuss Twilight's feelings for Nova, but other than that, the chapter has mostly been retooled and rewritten but still falling into the same line as the original.
Genlemen, ladies, truesailorcomet and I present to you the first public trailer for an audio drama adaptation of The Apprentice, the Student, and the Charlatan.
A few changes in this chapter. Some weren't big, but others were massive.
1) A whole new scene, in which Twilight pretty much forces Nova to start questioning whether he truly wants what he thinks he wants. Further should establish Nova's mixed feelings about his burgeoning relationship with Twilight, and get him moving toward where he needs to be.
2) For those of you who have read the story already, Future Nova makes a cameo! See if you can spot him!
I saw the Christmasowe'en special a few minutes ago, so I'm changing the chapter with Hearth's Warming to reflect it with Twilight and Spike. It's not a spectacularly huge edit, and the chapter will probably stay untouched in my revision (since it's well past the original stopping point I had planned). Just a minor thing you can look into when I get done.
There were a lot of changes this chapter, and there will be quite a few next chapter as well, but these next four should see the largest amount of changes, since this is where most of the early plot advancement and character development happens. After that, the remaining chapters will be mostly the same as they were.