I have a new description for Homecoming now thanks to a good friend, and before it goes live, I wanted to let you all see it.

Sunset Shimmer recieves devastating news from her previous world of Equestria. Twilight Sparkle of the human world accompanies her on her journey back home to help support her in her time of need. Neither returns to the human world the same way they left.

for more info, check this blog...I'm too sleepy to rewrite most of it right now... Insomnia got me in the gut last night.

Firstly, I finally settled on a color for pony Sunshine, which I'll be updating all appearances of her pony form to match.

Royal Azure

I've also finished with Chapter Twelve's revision, putting some veiled Sunshine crushing without majorly altering the plans for later chapters. There will probably be at least one more new chapter to spread take care of plot holes and another Sisters scene.

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The new chapter eleven is now live!

I'm going to start working on what is now chapter twelve later tonight, probably after I get done with class. That's the only downside to a night class, it's in the middle of my usual work times.

Anyway, I'm hoping to finish these updates by the weekend, so that I can go back to expanding the universe.

but first, I wanted to ask for your input. You all know why I'm doing the revisions and such, but there is something I haven't decided yet.

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I put the new Chapter Nine in its proper place and uploaded the new Chapter Ten and put the placeholder in for the new Chapter Eleven. It's not posted as there are only two hundred words in it so far, but the title should give you an idea of what it entails.

Saying Goodbye: Ashes

So between the new Dream Sequence, the late night redirection, and the new way the funeral is written, what do you all think of the rewrites thus far?

Fillies and gentlecolts, Matthew McConeneigh.

So I've done through the funeral scenes and will be adding another chapter tomorrow to slowly start introducing the SunLight in a more natural way.

Side note, my mouse dies just as I finish uploading the new chapter so it's a bit out of order for the time being. Please be patient with me as I do these revisions.

And holy carp! I'm in the featured box again? What?

Updates: 1 - 10 next edit coming in a few days.

So, away we go!

Updates: chapters 1-8 complete, new chapter nine undergoing proofing, and the old chapter nine is getting its makeover as we speak. Just got to rearrange the chapter orders and on to the next chapter.

Those of you who have checked out the updates, what are your thought so far?

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Updates: Chapter Eight is now complete, as is the NEW chapter Nine. The former chapter nine is now Chapter Ten and is on my list of things to work on tonight.

Updates: Last five percent of chapter eight drafted. New chapter nine being sketched out for posting later this week possibly.

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So in the course of updating Homecoming, I feel I need an updated description that more accurately portrays the events within. But since I don't think about it until after I use up my writing energy for the night, I keep coming up with bad ones.

So, those of you that have read it and enjoyed it - or didn't for any reason, though I doubt you'd be interested in anything I say in here - mind lending me a helping hoof?

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I'll be working on the dream sequence tonight, but I want thoughts from all of you.

What went through your minds when reading the encounter with Luna and the shade Sunset's mother? You can go back and reread if you want, I've only tweaked a few lines but haven't really touched the bulk of the dream.

For those of you wondering about the upcoming release goodies, I have tentative titles for the ideas;

search for the sirens - Search and Rescue or Something I Have to Do

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Well, in a relatively short time I will find out how my contest entries fared.

Don't really care if I win, just want to see objectively where I fall in comparison.

So, Updates:

Very soon you will be seeing a weekly ( hopefully) Update posting as I start going through my stories and fix continuity errors (which are real continuity errors and not plot hooks for later) and updating the content to make it better.

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So, with my contest entries done, I'm going to start focusing on Insurgence when not updating Comparing Notes.

But my anniversary on the site is coming up quick, as is NaNoWriMo. So I thought I'd put Homecoming, At Night, In For A Bit, and Mission of Mercy together with a few new little SoL flash fics together as a ebook to celebrate the occaision.

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Homecoming has 3.2k views.

When did Homecoming break 1k views? Let alone hit 3.2k?

So, I've been back since Friday, and my laptop had to go back in. That's when I discover that the mobile version - the phone, not tablet or the like - won't let me access my blog to post a new one, so that's one headache.

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I forgot one very critical thing for the Homecoming auditions.

Where to send them!

You can pm me here with YouTube links or send them to me directly on YouTube via dm.

Please, observe the formatting requests made in the audition information page.

Sweet Luna's Moon, the number of typos I made typing this...

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Well, I've posted the official casting call on YouTube and let's see what happens. I'm posting the acutal casting call below, but you may wish to turn your sound down a notch or two...for some reason the media program I used for this is finicky with it's sound properties...I miss my iMovie...maybe I can get it on my phone......

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In preparation to do Homecoming, I have done up the cast list and a set of auditioning lines.

I'm going to be doing two chapters at a time, since this was a short and simple story compared to some...like Forgotten Legacy or Chaos Theory.

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I checked my YouTube page earlier and I was astounded.

Since I started doing readings I've had close to 500 extra views and 14 subscribers.

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Equestria Girls
Rainbow Rocks
Friendship Games
Legend of EverFree

An Empty Seat, prequel story by Shrouded Lunes
Homecoming - Fall Semester, one year after LoEF
Something that Needed to be Done

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