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Dec
7th
2017

So Cal Winds · 5:44am Dec 7th, 2017

Wildfires everywhere. Winds knocked out power in my area. Can't work on stories.

Stay safe people. I don't know how long these winds will last.

They're even stronger than the Santa Ana Winds.

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Dec
4th
2017

Reference List thus far · 9:09am Dec 4th, 2017

I love references, I really do, but there are some people missed and since I'm bored as hell at 11:51 at night, I might as well list them so far.

Chapter: Ничто никогда не идет по плану

Nathan chuckled, "I did tell you the Raiders were going to beat the Eagles."

Reference to the American Football teams, the Oakland Raiders and the Philadelphia Eagles.

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Nov
27th
2017

Tying in my stories · 8:05pm Nov 27th, 2017

To those who also read The New Mentor, I said I would tie that story with The Greater Empire.

That, I've already started in the last chapter.

Lets see if anyone will catch what it is.

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Sep
30th
2017

The Greater Empire Writer's Block · 2:22am Sep 30th, 2017

For fuck's sake, I really do want to get The Greater Empire going again, but my mind keeps pouring out ideas for The New Mentor instead.

Maybe I'll rewatch Black Hawk Down or any movies with modern day military tech.

Anybody got suggestions?

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Sep
24th
2017

Songs give me ideas · 6:54am Sep 24th, 2017

Like these but they're for about 10 chapters later on

I'm very sorry if updating this chapter is taking so long. I've had my head in another fic. I still do have a lot of ideas, but my mind is split on how things should play out.

After I post the next chapter of "The New Mentor", I swear I'll be working on the next chapter of this fic.

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Aug
25th
2017

Can this heli carry a BMP-3? · 7:19am Aug 25th, 2017

I'm seriously debating if I should use the Mi-26 or the CH-47.

And do Mi-26 carry weapons as well? Every pic I've seen, they're unarmed.

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Jul
14th
2017

Uncle Leo · 1:57am Jul 14th, 2017

Maximilian Vorenus VII

7 years old

"Uncle Leo? Why is dad always busy? Does he ever have time to play with me and Jen?"

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Jul
13th
2017

Job Applications · 1:32am Jul 13th, 2017

Applied to 3 McDonald's, AMC Theater, Edward's Cinemas, an In-N-Out, Wendy's, an El Pollo Loco, Panera Bread, Barnes & Nobles, and Target.

Now

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Jul
12th
2017

Imperial Agents: Agent Warrior · 2:06am Jul 12th, 2017

"Ack, you stupid fucking monkey. You think freeing your kind from me will change anything?"

A fat brown unicorn leaned on a gondola of a ferris wheel. He had bruises all over his body and was bleeding from his mouth.

"Maybe not you fat slob, but I need you. I need you to send a message." The dark-skinned Imperial agent said as he tied a noose around the unicorn's neck.

The unicorn's eyes widened as he realized what he was implying.

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Jun
16th
2017

Question for any military experts · 1:45am Jun 16th, 2017

1. Can a BMP-3 survive hits from rockets such as the RPG-7 or the SMAW?

2. How long do anti-air missiles generally last in the air?

3. Can a Challenger 2 be destroyed by an SMAW to the side of the chasis and the turret?

4. Is the Javelin missile useful in close-quarters?

5. Can 120mm rounds, 125mm rounds, Kornet ATGM, Konkurs ATGM, and RPG-30 penetrate the fronts of Challenger 2s?

6. Has the RPG-30 ever been tested against the Trophy System and what were the results?

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May
28th
2017

Zombies? · 7:54am May 28th, 2017

So I was on my way to Laguna Beach with my family and I was listening to "115" and "Beauty of Annihilation". It got me thinking, what do ya'll think of zombies in the story? Of course, they won't be a big part of the story, maybe be part of a chapter or two so they'll largely be minor.

Still looking for a job, and still getting use to our new dog.

My brain is a jumbled mess of ideas for "The Greater Empire" and "The Rise of a New Empire".

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May
2nd
2017

Imperial Order #78 · 6:44am May 2nd, 2017

Hammer Down Protocol has been authorized for use by the following commands:

Dark Sword Command

Azure Shield Command

Red Hammer Command

White Ax Command

Green Arrow Command

Black Steel Command

Golden Flail Command

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Apr
9th
2017

Upcoming Story · 6:12am Apr 9th, 2017

Yes yes I know, you guys wanted me to update The Greater Empire. After watching Rogue One again, watching videos of Star Wars: Thrawn's Revenge 2 Ascendancy Mod, and reading plenty of Star Wars Comics, I felt like making a Star Wars story. Unlike other Star Wars stories, this story takes place post-Battle of Endor, during the time of the Imperial Remnant.

The Star Wars Universe here however, is heavily altered so if you don't like that, don't read it.


"The Return of a Grand Admiral"

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Apr
6th
2017

Me when I found an excellent source for Equestrian vehicles · 5:10am Apr 6th, 2017

As for the long update, besides college, I have 3 other new stories I'm working on.

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Apr
2nd
2017

This ship right here · 10:00pm Apr 2nd, 2017

This sexy ass ship


This is what I wanted from the start


Should I replace the Alvaro de Bazan-class Frigate with this, put both of them in the story, or just keep the Alvaro de Bazans and forget about the FREMMs.

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Mar
23rd
2017

Not so Casual Conversation · 6:53am Mar 23rd, 2017

"Subjects 173 and 682 have been contained Doctor. At least, that's what I've heard."

"Damn Division 9 and their experiments. Have the new batch of experiments arrived yet?"

*ROAR*

"Nevermind, that answered my question. We're gonna need them for the ponies when they arrived.

"Hopefully they'll obey and not end up like the last groups."

"Ech, I remembered the mess the last Subjects did to the ponies."

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Feb
28th
2017

Me seeing stories with way less likes get featured and not my own story. · 6:00am Feb 28th, 2017

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Feb
24th
2017

Imperial Order #75 · 7:39am Feb 24th, 2017

Imperial Order #75

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Feb
22nd
2017

Things of Beauties · 6:39am Feb 22nd, 2017

May use it as a fear weapon. Story needs more flammen.

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Feb
6th
2017

Radio Transmission 3 · 5:22am Feb 6th, 2017

"Enemy sniper on the Bell Tower! We need someone to take it down!"

"Roger that, Nameless on standby. Belastung HE! Gunner, Ziel der Glockenturm."

"Waffe bereit!"

"Feuer!"

"Musuh penggerak cepat datang dari timur!"

"Roger that, we see them. Vulcans fire when ready."

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