Hello, I need someone to help me adjust the tense in my story, Missed Stop; Monstrous Meeting.

EMissed Stop, Monstrous Meeting

• MLP: FiM
• Romance
• Comedy
• Drama

You wake up from your nap to discover that you missed your train stop. Now you are on a ride to the Crystal Empire. Fortunately, there is somepony here to keep you company.

• Alt. Universe
• Second Person
• OC
• Coconut Cream

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Apparently either my editor or my proofreader didn't get the memo that I wanted the story in Past Tense, and so it is a combination of both past and present tense.

Could someone please help me?

If you are interested I can send you a link to a gdoc to make things easier.