So yeah, after a dry spell, I think I'm making a bit of good headway in my story, Midlight Daze. I'll embed the story shortly. Although there's only one chapter so far, I hope that's enough till the 2nd chapter is ready. Please give it a read!
Fluttershy stared into the abyss that stretched on and on, and made her seem small—the deepened midlight that seemed to have no end. She wondered, "It's quite lonely, isn't it?" And so, she thought to give it company.
For now, I want some feedback here on this fight I wrote; about the flow, choreography, and any point of interest under the sun. I showed it to someone a couple months ago, and it made her... lose heart to say the least. She--errr... sorta stopped writing her latest story While I do hope she's taking it well and improving her writing, I kinda take that as a compliment??? So, I'm sharing this here to get more thoughts on it.
So yeah, after a dry spell, I think I'm making a bit of good headway in my story, Midlight Daze. I'll embed the story shortly. Although there's only one chapter so far, I hope that's enough till the 2nd chapter is ready. Please give it a read!
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
- Drama
Fluttershy stared into the abyss that stretched on and on, and made her seem small—the deepened midlight that seemed to have no end. She wondered, "It's quite lonely, isn't it?" And so, she thought to give it company.For now, I want some feedback here on this fight I wrote; about the flow, choreography, and any point of interest under the sun. I showed it to someone a couple months ago, and it made her... lose heart to say the least. She--errr... sorta stopped writing her latest story While I do hope she's taking it well and improving her writing, I kinda take that as a compliment??? So, I'm sharing this here to get more thoughts on it.