I'm not looking for hardcore proofreading and editing, so much as some comments on what a reader liked and didn't like and why; and what did and didn't make sense to the reader.
Please reply or PM. Thanks!
I'm not looking for hardcore proofreading and editing, so much as some comments on what a reader liked and didn't like and why; and what did and didn't make sense to the reader.
Please reply or PM. Thanks!