3202549 Amazing, are you lying, to me. yes I know, but what's the point of writing them if only you will like them? I need to have others like them, at lest a few, I'm not asking to be known as the best mlp fim poet to ever live.

3202558
And i aint lying mate. But if you keep putting yourself down for it thats whats gonna happen im afraid mate. Honestly if you look down thats were things are gonna go in bad times. If you look up in bad times, eventually you will get there. Wether its being recognized by a few people of this fandom or actually being fully recognized, it will get better over time. Honestly mate i've been there. I thought so many times after a mock test when i got the shittest grades outta my entire class that whats the point in continuing doing this if im just going to fail. It even drove me to the point of thinking about suicide. But i just kept looking up in dark times and slowly but surely my grades are meeting whats expected of me. Its all about time and self confidence and will power my friend.

3202562 You don't understand, that's all I show I never show joy or anything happy, no one wants sad poems. My other poems are sad too, all I write is sad poems.

3202568

....Well i dont know what to say really. I mean your a awesome lad i know and i cant understand how you only show that one emotion. But I guess im not by your side am I. Honestly mate if theres ever something you want me to do, just ask me okay.

3202573 Okay, send me to ponyville. Haa, sorry I had to. but here's a poem that is happy, I think.

Pony of Joy

I love everypony,
I'm a very happy pony,
they all say I'm to happy,
they say I'm to joyful,
but I don't care,
I'm just here to have fun,
they tell me stop,
but I keep on going,
they tell me calm down,
but I just stay the same,
I don't care what they say,
I'm will never go down that path,
I'm the joyful pony,
I'm happy all the time,
I'm filled with happiness,
there is no end to my joy,
for I'm the joyful pony they see,
few know how,
and fewer tries to know how,
but I don't care,
I'm the joyful pony.

I just came up with that right now.

3202587

That is happy. Very happy. And maybe i could sort you out a flight there sometime

3202590 You liked that, so odd, I struggled to write that, but most of my poems are made with in a few, and I never go back and change anything about them, because the first time is the best one.

thanks.*Hug*, I shouldn't have doubted you,*Hug tighter and closer*.

3202598

Its okay mate honestly i think your a amazing poet. Also dont ever let anyone tell you your not awesome okay.

3202599 Thanks, *Hug tighter* I really am thankful for the help. this has to be the best family I've seen. *Hug again* I wish it would never end.

3202600

*i laugh slightly and mess with your mane a little after giving you a hug* dont worry about it. And this family is sticking together..you can trust me on that

3202602 You will, I love you.*Hug*.

3202605

Love you too kiddo. Well i got a hit of spare time. Want to play anything?

3202606 What you want to play?

3202608

Hide 'n' seek?

3202609 hide n' seek? Okay, you want to go first.

3202612

Alright then. I'l hide and you try and find me. Anywhere counts?

3202614 Okay, *Turn and look away* 1, 2, 3, 4.

3202621

*i fly up into the nearest cloud and drag another one on top of me with my tail just sticking out*

3202622 5, 6, 7, 8, 9

3202625

*i sit completely still inside of the cloud waiting for him to finish counting.*

3202627 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, ready or not here I come. *flies up to see more*

3202628

*i hear a faint muffled here i come ready or not and smile slightly shifting the cloud*

3202632 I will find you, no matter what. *Flies around a little looking.*

3202634

*i stifle a small laugh and bite down on my hoof to stop me from laughing more*

3202637 *I look around more, not able to find him anywhere.* Where are you?

3202638

*i slowly begin to move the cloud towards you*

3202641 *I look around with out even stopping to notice that a cloud was moving at me.*

3202643

*i move it up behind you and open a bit up and tap you on the shoulder before closing it again*

3202645 *I look behind me after feeling something touch me, all I found was a cloud, so I laned on the cloud.*

3202648

*i peek up from inside the cloud* comfy kiddo?

3202649 Whoa. *I jump off the cloud.* Y-you ca-can ta-talk?

3202651

Yeah i can talk. And i dont like being sat on to much as well.*inside of the cloud im struggling to hold back tears and laughter*

3202653 Ummmmmmmm........... I'm so-sorry mr-mr clo-mr. cloud, I di-didn't me-mean to sit on y-you.*Flies back a little.*

3202654

*i open up the cloud throwing the top half away laughing hard with tears forming at the edges of my eyes*

Sweet celestia kid you should have seen your face.

3202657 *I pout* No fare, that's cheating.*Pout even more*

3202562 I did it, I got brave enough and post a few of my poems, now I'm just waiting for submission.

3202761

Well done matey. Thats the way forward

3203098 It's better than my other stories.

3203105

Thats great already

3203115 thanks*Hug*I love you uncle midnight.

3203130

S'all right kid. Dont worry bout a thing. Hey...i got you something from my last deployment.

3203134 what is it!?

3203138

*i reach into my saddle bag and pull out a polished gold gallantry medal* here kiddo. Its a medal for being brave. And i reckon you deserve it.

3203141 *Take medal* Wow, for me! *Hug tight onto your leg.*

3203145

Yeah its for you *i say laughing slightly and messing with your mane a little* Bravest foal i know.

3203148 thanks uncle Midnight you're the best. *Looks at the medal*

3203149

Its okay kiddo. Now i just gotta grab something to eat. Absolutly hank marvin. I'l see ya in two abbil.

3203151 bye.*Looks at medal again.*

3203152

*after a little cooking and eating i walk back in seeing you playing with the medal still* enjoying your first medal?

3203188 Hell yeah.