Okay guys, I have written five chapters for my story: Twilight's Pupil and I would really like it if somepony could give me some constructive criticism on some of the more recent chapters. Also, I would like it if somepony just read it but that's besides the point.

Here's the synopsis:

It's been over a decade since Twilight Sparkle was crowned as a princess of Equestria. Princess Celestia thinks that it's time her student start a new journey. She gives Twilight the responsibility of having her very own pupil, she must care for and teach the chosen filly. However, choosing a pupil isn't as easy as it sounds.

Is Princess Twilight Sparkle ready for the challenges lying ahead?

So if you're interested go and give it a read. I would really love somepony to give me some feedback.

- Crystal Secret