Formerly just referred to as "The Crystal Empire". I'm submitting it to the quorum for Lunaverse canonization. This is a bit of a shorter one from me....which will be good if I have to make any major changes to it!
6414588 I have no problems with the story overall, though given that the shadow moth shows up again at the end now I'd advice putting bits and pieces of hints in earlier chapters that Yangin's been infected. But otherwise you can start posting it when you like.
Formerly just referred to as "The Crystal Empire". I'm submitting it to the quorum for Lunaverse canonization. This is a bit of a shorter one from me....which will be good if I have to make any major changes to it!
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
And....that's about all I have to say, really!
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Too long. My own fault, really.
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I have no problems with the story overall, though given that the shadow moth shows up again at the end now I'd advice putting bits and pieces of hints in earlier chapters that Yangin's been infected. But otherwise you can start posting it when you like.