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Well, since "Let it Go" and "Do you want to Build A Snowman" have both been ponified, I thought I'd write lyrics for a Celestia and Luna version of "For the First Time in Forever," since it was so obvious what it would be about, and wow was that a perfect fit! I'm still working on the reprise, but I plan to have that written as well. If any of you can sing or know anyone who does (two is better) could someone please make a duet mare cover of this?

I really want to see this made. This is the third group I'm posting this in, because I really, really want someone to sing this. I only ask that you tell me first, and that I'm given credit for writing these lyrics.

It's best to read it while listening to an instrumental, though it doesn't have them duet at once. So listen to the original fist.


[Celestia:] (Talking) She’s coming home tonight!

[Celestia:] (Singing)
The sun is shining on this day.
My last one alone, I am glad to say,
The ending of one thousand lonely years.
Ten centuries I’ve been on my own,
Without my sister, all alone.
Finally she’s coming home tonight.

It'll be so good for her to be back.
I admit that it feels a bit strange.
But wow, am I so ready for this change!

'Cause for the first time in forever,
I'll have Luna here with me.
For the first time in forever,
It will be as it should be.

Words can’t express my excitement
That I can finally share the throne.
'Cause for the first time in forever,
I won't be alone.

(Talking)
I can't wait for her to meet everypony! [gasp]
What will they think of her?

(Singing)
The night will sparkle, stars will shine
As brilliantly as in old times.
A tapestry of tantalizing grace.
I suddenly see her over there
Bringing a night that’s calm and fair.
She’ll make a shooting star fall just for me.

I can let go of all my anguish,
For having to send her away.
How glad I am that she is here to stay!

'Cause for the first time in forever
All my waiting, it will end.
For the first time in forever
She will be back with me again.

I still can’t believe she is coming back.
I waited for so long.
But for the first time in forever
I’ll finally right my wrongs.

[Luna/Night Mare Moon:]
I’ll show them now, I’ll let them see
The darkness that has taken over me.
Reveal, how I feel, show them the night.
And let my sister will know that I was right.

[Luna:] The wrath of Nightmare Moon.
[Celestia:] She’ll be coming back real soon.

[Luna:] I’ll cause the ponies fright.
[Celestia:] With the full moonlight.

[Luna:] I will bring about eternal night.
[Celestia:] Tonight!

[Celestia:] For the first time in forever,
[Luna:] I’ll show them now, I’ll make them see

[Celestia:] I can finally make amends.
[Luna:] Show them the nighttime as it ought to be.

[Celestia:] A chance to make apologies,
[Luna:] Reveal

[Celestia:] And be once again her friend.
[Luna:] Reveal, they’ll feel, they’ll see the night.

[Celestia:]
I know it all ends by sunrise,
So I'll wait for her tonight.
'Cause for the first time in forever,
For the first time in forever,
I think I’ll be alright!

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Reprise:
I finally finished writing the reprise.

I'll need to explain the backstory for this one. When Nightmare Moon returns during the Summer Sun Celebration, Celestia uses a spell to hold the dark entity back so that she can talk (or sing) to Luna to try to convince her to fight off the curse. But Celestia's spell is only temporary, and Luna becomes corrupted again by the end of the song and banishes Celestia to the sun.

I'd like some help writing dialog for before the song.

This thread is also posted in Celestia & Luna and Music Lovers.

[Celestia:]
[talking]
Can you ever forgive me? Don’t be afraid.

[singing]
I won’t shut you out again!
I won't slam the door.
I will never keep my distance anymore.

Cause for the first time in forever,
You’ll be back home at last.
For the first time in forever,
We can let go of the past.

We can stop this nightmare together.
You don't have to cause this fear.
Cause for the first time in forever,
I will be right here.

[Luna:]
Tia,
Please send me back.
Enjoy your reign.
I will only hurt you and cause you more pain.

[Celestia:]
No, you—

[Luna:]
I know
You miss me.
I love you, too.
But leave me here,
And I fear what I’ll do.
Just send me back, and I cannot hurt you.

[Luna/ Nightmare Moon]: (slowly transforming)
Actually… you can’t.

[Celestia:]
Why do you say I can’t?

Nightmare Moon:
I’m too much for you to fight.

[Celestia:]
We have to set this right.

[Nightmare Moon:]
I will bring a dark, eternal night.

[talking]
[Celestia:]
What! (Celestia holds back Nightmare Moon)

[Luna:]
I’m back to bring the night that lasts forever.
Nightmare Moon:
FOREVER! (Celestia holds her back again)

[Celestia:]
Forever?

[Celestia:]
Luna, it's okay,
You can fight against it.

[Luna:]
No, I can't.
I, I don't know how.

[Celestia:]
Yes you can!
I know you can!

[singing]
[Celestia + (Luna):]
Cause for the first time in forever,
(I can’t let go, there’s jealousy.)
I will be right here for you.
(No escape from the curse inside of me.)
We can work this out together.
(I can't control my hate)
You can come back home with me.
(Your apology has come too late!)
Don't give in.
(Can’t be repaired.)
We'll make your stars shine bright.
(You never cared.)
We can stop this curse together.
(NO!)
I will care for you forever.
And everything will be...
(I CAN'T!)

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Maybe something like...

C: Please, Luna, can't you at least try?

Luna: *eyes narrow into slits before she shakes her head and returns to normal* No, I really can't.

Celestia: What do you mean you can't?

Luna: Tia, you don't understand! *coat darkens*

Celestia: What don't I understand?

Luna: Nightmare Moon, she's- *voice shifts as she transforms* far too big to fight...

Nightmare Moon: *laughing* There's nothing you can do... sister.

Celestia: *brings Luna back before Nightmare can completely and take over*

Celestia: Luna, please! You can fight against it!

Luna: No, I can't! I don't know how!

I assume Luna turns back into Nightmare Moon during the rest of it and goes beyond the point of no return at the end?

3041482 Thanks, that was a huge help. I am trying to get the syllables and rhyme pattern to match with the original, which yours didn't do quite so well, but it helped me figure out the words I needed. I updated the lyrics in the comment above yours. I did switch their rolls, but it works out pretty well.

omg!
Thank you. I'm in :heart: with all these MLP Frozen parodies. They're AMAZING
~ Cryssie
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