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Comment posted by Cute H Unknownia deleted Jun 10th, 2015

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I would need help on my fiction i try to make it fit for the most peoples out there but the most just tell me the negatives and i need something positive (really) comments. Help would be nice its a first try (but i tried before but dont posted my old version belive me it was 1000 times badder then this). So the tags are (i know they sound bad but i wanted to write something about it) TAGS: Ponies (no antro or human), Sex, Rape, other tags? (if you know some tell me in the comments) Characters: Twilight Sparkle, Mane 6, The Great and Powerful Trixie, others,
link: The Humiliation of Twilight Sparkle (i am to shy to post it on fimfiction, for now i use google docs (everyone has excess to read and comment). Some looks would be great and if you find something what sounds wrong or have any tips for me just tell me (i am open for it. I dont bite. Do you bite? ^^):trixieshiftright: (trixie is watching you)

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