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1129187 1129212 (back for a little bit)
"Certainly madam, right this way." The waiter leads Raging up the stairs and shows her a table. "Will you be waning anything to drink?"

1127953 Blue sighs. "No it wouldn't, Heaven I like you and I am interested in you. But give me a few days to decide that, okay?"

1131252
Heaven nodded, sighing. "Right... of course that makes sense."

1131389 1129187 Blue gave her a smile as there food arrived. "Thank you." He said to the waiter. As he looked around before starting his meal, his eyes rested on someone.

1131435
Heaven nodded again, starting to eat her meal as well.

1131788 (Think i'm going to wait for Arackn to get on)

1131235>>1131807(Sorry, had to leave for a few hours :unsuresweetie:)
"Sure, do you have any good wine?" she asked before looking around. "It's hard to find a fine wine today."

1134064>>1131807 (Back. Oh and Arackn you can control NPC's)

1134064 The waiter raises an eyebrow. "Madam we have a wide collection of wines for your tasting pleasure, do you have any preferences?"

1134387>>1134064
((I'm on now.))

1134481
((So now we wait for Arackn?))

1134391 1134412 (Yeah! I'm back again, sorry, I'm passing exams again. Unfortunately, I'm really bad with the "classy" language.)
"Do you have a Cabernet? It's my favorite rosé." said Raging before looking at the menu. "And for the meal I choose a steak."
"I am going to bring you your order, Madam."

1135317>>1134481
Recognizing Raging's voice Heaven looked around. When her eyes rested on Raging she sighed. "Oh..."

1136006>>1134481 While waiting for the waiter to return with her meal, Raging looked at the other clients. Her gaze stopped on a particular stallion and she began to smile.

1136006>>1136243 (God man damn it:facehoof:)
Blue waves. "Well look who it is."He gestures for her to come over.

1136243>>1137154
Heaven smiled, hoping that Raging didn't recognize her.

1137154>>1137226 Raging come to them, grinning. "Hello ! Well, it seems that you finally have find your 'special somepony' or any other mushy word you want to use, Blue. Do I know her?"

1137226>>1137393 Blue looks over Heaven. "I think you may have meet once or twice but you wouldn't recognize her." He says with a grin.

1137393>>1137401
Heaven blushed, looking away from Raging. "Yes, hello again."

1137401>>1137423 "So it means that she was either covered in cloth, or using a spell. Don't let too much choice. And since I love bet, I bet that she either Dim or Star!"

1137455
((Wait, which star does she mean? There are two. Star Craving and... Heaven.))

1137465 (It was intentional actually :pinkiehappy: But in her head it's Craving)

1137455>>1137465 Blue shrugs and smiles. "Which one's the ninja."

1137455>>1137475
Heaven's ear twitched when Blue mentioned ninja. Though she didn't say anything.

1137475 "Oh, so she is a ninja? Well I only know one ninja that you know too. So I guess it's Heaven then? You're prettier than I though you were. You seriously need to wear less full armor. Even if when I though about it, Blue always try to wear his armor." she said thoughtfully.

1137506 "And? Your one to talk, you always wear armor."

1137524 "Wrong! Today I have a pretty cloak. And if I wear always armor, it's mainly because otherwise I would burn myself. Fireball can sometimes go out of control." she said with a small laugh before asking "So is it your first date ? I would be soooo sorry to interrupt such an important moment."

1137524>>1137536
"Yes, I'm Heaven." She sighed, shaking her head. "And don't call me pretty, I already have a stallion thinking about my flank... I don't need mares calling me pretty as well..." She sighed again, mumbling to herself.

1137536 Blue placed a hoof on Heaven's shoulder rubbing gently.

1137565
Heaven blushed slightly at Blue's touch. "Um... why are you doing that?" She asked, looking at him.

1137546>>1137565 "You are the first one that don't want to be called pretty, beautiful. Well as much as I love annoying you, I have something to do, and I'm hungry. So I'll leave you for the moment. But I'm sure that I we will meet again, after all I know where you live." she said, almost singing with a smirk.
(2.30 AM for me... Need to sleep so I'm leaving you, and yes I've finally find a reason for Raging to be here.)

1137578
((Oh? And what's that?))

1137581 (Family reason, basically she is here to find someone that tried to steal them, and make him pay, is that okay though?)

1137596 (Sounds cool.)

1137596>>1137599
((Yes it does.))

1137847 (So now that we have another team mate will be expecting Ninja's?)

1137859
((Soon. Very soon. How was the story by the way?))

1138324 (Honestly...It was quite fast paced and there were a few moments that I would have done differently but that's just my preference. It was okay, and i'm not one to talk, i'm only two chapter in to my current project and haven't uploaded anything in months:twilightsheepish:)

1138324 (Your story A new Equestria is really good, even if some times it's a little too fast, and I'm sometime lost in how much time have passed between the events. For example, Rainbow was three month in prisons, but what happened? It feel like something is missing. But I can't really judge since every time I tried to write a story, I failed miserably :unsuresweetie::facehoof: I'm still at the chapter 16 Final Days, and Umbra really look like Torchwood )

1140278>>1138324 (Who's on?)

1140344 (Hmm wonder if we could get anything done....I just had an amazing idea)

1140346 (And what's that?)

1140348 (You know how cartoons have an episode where the cast goes on a side trip adventure? Something like that but involving Ninja's. We could even look at Raging's side quest thingy.)

1140351 (Hey, why not, too bad we are only three. But I don't really know what to do for the moment. Maybe make Raging finish her meal :rainbowhuh:)

1140372>>1138324 (Let me introduce you to my little friends, scene transition and plot hook)
Taking his hoof off her shoulder Blue shrugs. "Because you needed support." He says. "Now come on our meals are getting cold."

As the waiter takes the last of their dishes away Blue lights his horn and drops a bag of bits on the table as he rises from the table. "Thanks for the meal." As he and Heaven walk out of the restaurant and begin the short walk back to her place Blue catches sight of and old...friend. Freezing up his eye twitches slightly, he leans over and nuzzles in Heaven's ear. "I need you to go back to your place, there is something I need to do." Stop to give her a quick peck on the check before hurrying away.

(And that is how you switch scenes my friend.)

1140383 (Hey, not bad, and who is your old friend?)
After finishing her meal and payed, Raging walk out of the restaurant, watching her teammates going away with a grin. Well, the valiant knight and the treacherous ninja, it can only end well. she though before taking a map.I need to find this place, after all, it's my job to take care of him.

1140397 (Someone from his childhood, oh and if you want to get a reaction out of him mention the Nightmare Tears, their a gang from Manehatten. Was thinking we could incorporate them somehow?)
As Blue walked down another street he scanned the crowd in an effort to spot his 'friend' again, but the stallion had slipped the net. Grimacing Blue turned around to begin the long walk back to Heaven's place

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