er hi been a while anyway i need a bit if feedback weather this is to confusing of a infodump casully used in a offhandway its ment to confuse the reader but also hint at stuff not revealed yet

"You try spending most of your life two fifths reptilian and not develop the need to relax on a rock during a beautiful sunny day like this."

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Honestly, without some proper narrative context, the only thing I can say is that it's a sentence that surprises you more than do anything else.

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That's the idea I'm going for its ment to be a surprise on physical changes to my oc (people reading know he's part demon) but the characters in it are not ment to